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Post by RandallBoggs on Jul 4, 2008 23:50:06 GMT -5
Not a bad start, and i mean that ^_^
Sandra makes her return ^0^ In all the Mary Sue goodness(JKing ^_^)
Ran a little there ^_^
Actually some hand them in the morning if they worked late enough and the like ^_^
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Post by RandallBoggs on Jul 4, 2008 23:55:08 GMT -5
^_^ Of course it does ^0^ Like the little things like that mint-snatching at the end ^0^
AH! Was going to mention a guess of the timeline ^_^ Ahh so when he WAS...hmm...even more so an interest ^_^
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Post by RandallBoggs on Jul 4, 2008 23:59:42 GMT -5
Hehehe ^_^
Ah ^_^
ARLEADY?? Wow heh heh ^_^
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Post by RandallBoggs on Jul 5, 2008 0:11:29 GMT -5
Hehehe ^_^ Actually Randall was a trainer for a short period ^_^ Loan if you will, too ^_^
RANDALL? A FLIRT? Tahahaha ^0^ Oh yes I can I can see that ^0^ Hehehe, you should check out the Boss Day CoMONdy ^0^
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Post by RandallBoggs on Jul 5, 2008 0:17:01 GMT -5
Oh? ^_^
That is true ^_^
Hmm? ^_^ Well if there was a sort of summary....
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Post by RandallBoggs on Jul 5, 2008 0:20:46 GMT -5
Alrighty then ^_^
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Post by RandallBoggs on Jul 5, 2008 0:32:22 GMT -5
Longer and longer actually ^_^
Nice exchanging ^_^ Oh so different ^_^
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Post by RandallBoggs on Jul 5, 2008 0:36:33 GMT -5
See ^_^
Hehehe ^_^ Always wondered OOC was...guess Out Of Character is it ^_^
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Post by RandallBoggs on Jul 5, 2008 0:45:35 GMT -5
^_^
Same time here ^_^ Should head out myself ^_^ Look forward to more of your story later ^_^
Hehehe ^_^ I had a name for something like that....Blast Inspiration I think ^0^
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Post by RandallBoggs on Jul 5, 2008 18:57:08 GMT -5
Tahaha not bad not bad ^_^ Like the opening bit with using a title against him ^0^
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Post by RandallBoggs on Jul 5, 2008 19:43:44 GMT -5
Hehehe ^_^
Noticed ^_^
Ahh something to see ^_^
Agreed ^0^
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Post by Deleted on Jul 5, 2008 20:20:25 GMT -5
OK so like, I normally work on my massive Trafalgar book every night at around this time and just sort of chill while chatting here on the site when suddenly I see this has been put up, ironically on the night I'm utterly exhausted from getting only three hours of sleep from the previous night. So completely missed it last night. When I see it I'm like "hmmm, continue on with the account of how the HMS Revenge gallantly cuts the enemy line and goes on to engage the San Illdefonso, Achille, and the massive Principe de Asturias all at once and still come out on top or.....a fic that has the words Ran/San in it which means it probably stars my all time favorite reluctant pair and written by FairlyOddNewYorker?" Heck yes! I jump onboard the Ran/San one! XD So yeah, I just have loved Sandra as an original character, always have FONY, and this fic I'm really looking forward to seeing develop out and grow. Using his popularity against him was what made me grin this time around, and the dialogue is pretty believable and well written, so that I'm not sleeping through it like some other fanfics I've read from other authors. So yeah, I'm waiting for more and will just keep hanging out here every night and continuing with engaging Trafalgar reading until more is posted. XD Keep it up!  |
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Post by Malic on Jul 5, 2008 20:44:00 GMT -5
I like it so far. Good job. ;D
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Post by Deleted on Jul 5, 2008 20:44:54 GMT -5
Yep, can see that, and yeah, it was fine, I guess the only sketchy thing would them being able to see other when faded but oh well, was never explained in depth in the movie anyways and thus it's your rule to play around with if you like, and I didn't personally see any problems with it. Seems they have their first official date now  |
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Post by RandallBoggs on Jul 5, 2008 20:47:35 GMT -5
Nice norm chap ^_^
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