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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Jul 26, 2006 23:15:38 GMT -5
Oh, grr you! Awsome. 627: EVIL! No it's not evil, well, maybe the heartless and the villans, but no one else.
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Post by Veg on Jul 30, 2006 1:36:11 GMT -5
Okay, next chapter up. PLEASE REVIEW!!!!
CHAPTER 9
Randall turned to Asmodeus. “Asmodeus, take Bambi back to the thicket.” Asmodeus nodded and slithered off, with Bambi following. Ferncloud led Randall to a dry ditch, where sounds of battle could be heard. Randall gasped at what he saw. Woodlanders were attacking vermin. Cluny and a squirrel were rolling around in the dust, screeching and clawing each other. Sela and Chickenhound was batting mice and hedgehogs away with their paws. Badrang and a brown squirrel were clawing and biting each other savagely. Fleabane and Rotnose fought back-to-back, trying to drive away three otters. Hisk had a struggling mouse pinned down, until a hedgehog rolled right into him, leaving him pierced and screaming with pain. Skalrag was battling with a huge badger, avoiding it’s strong jaws. Gurrad was pinned down by Mandurah Vermin-death. “Don’t give them mercy, mates!” Mandurah shouted. “Give them what they deserve.” Then to Randall’s horror, Mandurah lunged and sank her teeth into Gurrad’s neck. Gurrad thrashed around, screaming in pain. Randall turned to Ferncloud. “Quick, get the king over here.” Ferncloud nodded and raced off. Randall raced down to Mandurah and batted her away. “STOP THIS AT ONCE!” He shouted. Two red squirrels raced past him, leaping on Cluny. Randall raced over and batted them away. A mouse leaped on him, fur fluffed out with fear. Randall stared at the mouse. It was no more than a young one! He batted it away. “This is not your battle.” Mandurah then leaped on him. “Traitor! Why are you helping these vermin?!” Randall batted her away. “Because they are my friends and I can’t let you destroy them!” He shouted at her. Mandurah leaped up, sneering. “Friends? Vermin are never friends!” Suddenly, a huge roar echoed through. Mufasa leaped down. “CEASE YOUR BATTLING!!” Silence followed. Mufasa glared at everyone, fury in his eyes. “Now...I want a good explanation on why warriors are fighting with warriors!” Mandurah stepped up. “Your majesty, the vermin were going into our territory. We were only defending what was ours.” “We were on patrol!” Gurrad said. “We were supposed to be by your territory!” “You lying coward!” The brown squirrel shouted. “Silence!” Mufasa snapped. He looked at the vermin. “You, gray weasel with the green nose. Tell me what happened.” Rotnose stepped up, wincing from a leg wound. “Your m-majesty,” He stuttered. “We were going on a normal evening patrol after we took our apprentices home. Then the woodlanders leaped on us, shouting things like, ‘Scum of earth’ or ‘Vermin will be vermin’ or ‘Black-hearted cowards’ or ‘You think you are warriors? Let us show you how real warriors fight’. Things like that. We had to defend ourselves, great king. We fought.” Mufasa turned to the woodlanders, fury lighting in his eyes. “Is this true?” The woodlanders looked down at their paws. “It’s true,” the mouse said. Mufasa’s claws dug into the earth. “Now, you listen to me. You say woodlanders are good beasts and vermin are bad ones. That may be true in the past, but now you are in a land where everyone, should get along! The attack you did upon your fellow warriors was a foolish and cruel thing to do. And I am sorry to say, you are no better off than the Evil Ones!” The woodlanders looked up at their king with horror. “But,” Mufasa said. “I am a wise and good king. From now on, you and the vermin shall not be together until I think you can trust them.” A badger snorted. “Like that is going to happen.” He was silenced by a glare from Mufasa. Mufasa raised his paw. “Go now.” Sela stepped up. “I can offer some of my healing herbs to you.” Mandurah glared at her. “Stay out of our way, Scum-bag.” She hissed. “We do not need your herbs!” The woodlanders went off. Sela shook her head sadly as she got out a herb and started chewing on it. After chewing it up for sometime, she spat it out and pressed it against Ferncloud’s shoulder wound. “I don’t understand it.” She sighed. “The Heartless from us are gone for good. Why do they still hate us?” Ferncloud winced in pain. “Some creatures are like that, mother. They still remember the terrible things we did to them and they hold a terrible grudge against us.” She then looked away with a sad look. “Nothing is more worse than grudges.” Mufasa nodded. “Wise words for a young warrior like yourself. But be warned, you haven’t seen the last of Mandurah and her band. Some of them may leave you alone, but I’m afraid Mandurah won’t rest until she has driven every vermin out.”
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Jul 30, 2006 1:44:09 GMT -5
Why did Ferncloud call Sela mother? Just a question, but anyways. Poor Vermin, hope their ok.
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Post by Veg on Aug 21, 2006 12:04:00 GMT -5
Because she's a character I made up and she's Sela's daughter. Okay, sorry this took soooo long, but since Sean was gone, I decided not to post anymore chapters until he's back so he could review. Well enjoy the next chapter and review it.
CHAPTER 10
Years passed, and the apprentices were growing bigger and stronger. Bambi and Ronno were now young bucks with growing antlers. But there was a small problem for Randall. And that was Veil. He had fallen into a sickness. Randall paced back and forth in front of Sela’s den, waiting to hear about Veil. Sela then came out. “How is he?” Randall asked. “It’s just a little cold,” Sela said. “He will be fine. I have to get a few herbs, so go inside and see him.” Randall went into the den, which was surprisingly big enough for him. Mr. Onus had some herbs and was trying to get Veil to eat it. “Come on, it will help you get better.” Veil looked away, scowling. Mr. Onus looked up at Randall. “Can you help me please? He won’t eat his medicine.” Randall nodded and took the herb. He placed it under Veil’s nose. “Come on, eat it up.” Veil looked up at him. “Think of it as a test.” Randall told him. “See if you can handle it like a warrior.” That did the trick. Veil picked up the herb with his mouth and started to chew. Mr. Onus looked relieved. “Thanks.” Scroop then came into the den. “Randall, have you seen Ali or Jan?” Randall shook his head. “No, I haven’t. Why?” “They’re gone!” Scroop said. “The warriors are searching for them, but we can’t find them anywhere. Watto and Maria are very worried.” “I’m sure they’ll show up.” Randall said. “They were always flying off somewhere when they were younger. But just in case, I’ll search with you.” Then a half-grown doe came in. “Scroop, me, Simba and Banzai searched near the edge of Critter Country, but they weren’t there. Where should we search next?” “We’ll go search near Tomorrowland, Faline.” Scroop said. Faline nodded and went off. “She’s growing up fast,” Randall said. Scroop nodded. When they arrived at the entrance of Tomorrowland, Banzai was waiting with Simba who was almost half grown. “Where could they be?” Banzai said. “Every warrior searched everywhere and we still couldn’t find them!” “I’m sure wherever they are, they are safe.” Simba told him.
And indeed, Jan and Ali were safe. They were out in the forest, a few miles away from the Disney Kingdom, pretending to be warriors. Jan waved his sword, which was really a big stick. “Can you stop waving that thing around?” Ali asked. “Remember what mother said when we were young? Don’t play with sticks or else you’ll poke someone in the eye.” Jan snorted. “A warrior doesn’t need a mother to tell him what to do.” Ali sighed. “I’m hungry, shouldn’t we go back to the kingdom?” Jan nodded. “We should, except I don’t know which way we should go.” Ali thought for a moment. “Well...we came from the west, so...we should go west?” “Which way is west?” “I don’t know. I thought you knew.” “No, I thought you did.” The two young Toydarian’s looked at each other. “AARGH! We’re lost!”
A few miles away, in the Evil One’s territory, Scar the black lion stood in front of a ferret. “Now you know what you must do, Vallug.” Vallug knelt down in front of Scar. “Yes, sir. I must go into the Disney Kingdom and kill King Mufasa.” Scar nodded. “Do you think you can do this?” Vallug took out an arrow and aimed at an unsuspecting Heartless. Then he fired. The Heartless screamed and disappeared. Vallug looked at Scar, unfazed by the killing he did. “I never miss.”
“Now the moss on the trees go north. That’s what Sebulba taught me. So we have tO figure out which way the sun came up and go the opposite direction of that.” Ali looked up at the mountains. “Mother said that the sun always came from the mountain side, so we should go away from the mountains.” Jan nodded. “Then off we go.” Just then, a ferret came out from the bushes. “My, my, my.” The ferret said. “Look at what I just found.”
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Oct 14, 2006 1:24:44 GMT -5
Uh-oh. Doesn't sound good for Ali and Jan. Don't stop, keep on going. And if no one else replies then I'll reply each and every chapter. ^_^ Just don't stop, it's awsome.
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Post by Veg on Oct 30, 2006 16:41:43 GMT -5
All right, here's the other one. PLEASE REVIEW!!! ANYONE!!!
Chapter 11
At the castle, all the warriors were talking in small groups. “I bet it was Jan who had the idea of wandering off in the first place.” Sebulba mumbled. “He is a good apprentice and will make into a fine warrior, but he is a bit headstrong.” He then made a fist. “Oooh, when I get my hands on him, I’ll take him to Sela so she can feed him those disgusting herbs until he turns blue! Then I’m gonna take him to the river and make him wash up until he turns red! Then I’ll...I’ll...” “All right, that’s enough!” Randall said. But he couldn’t help smiling because he knew Sebulba would never do anything like that to his apprentice. “Ali was such a good Toydarian,” Scroop’s father, Sagaxis, sighed. “But I suppose she went along with her brother because they are very close to each other.” Randall looked over at Watto, who was comforting Maria, who glanced around with a worried look. Mufasa then appeared. “Warriors,” he called out. “Everyone knows about the two missing apprentices. Until they are found, warriors will have to double the patrols.” Everybody nodded. “And,” Mufasa said, “we should reassure Watto and Maria, that their children will be found.” Watto looked up and nodded. “Thank you, your majesty.”
Jan and Ali stared in horror at the ferret with the bow and arrows. Jan grabbed his sword-stick and held it in front of him. “Leave us alone, or you’ll be dealing with us!” Vallug raised his paw. “Hold on, young one. I am just a simple traveler who is trying to find the Disney Kingdom.” Jan looked at him with a great big smile. “Well fancy that. We’re going back to the Disney Kingdom too. It’s just a day’s travel from here.” Ali turned and flew off. “Just follow us.” Vallug let himself do an evil smile as he followed the two Toydarians into the forest.
*waits for reviews*
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Post by Veg on Nov 1, 2006 17:16:17 GMT -5
Why isn't anyone reviewing?
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