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Post by Veg on Jun 10, 2006 23:50:15 GMT -5
Sequel to Disney Warriors. Enjoy it!!! ;D
PROLOGUE
Vallug was a thirteen years old ferret who was a good archer. He practiced everyday and his father always taught him a few pointers. Some vermin had never really gotten close to their children, but Vallug and his father have a very special close bond. Vallug was out in the forest, aiming at dead tree trunks and never missing. “You shoot well, for a young one.” A voice said. Vallug turned around. A scrawny lion with a black mane whipped his tail. Vallug took a step back. “Who are you? What do you want?” “I am Scar,” The lion said. “Leader of the greatest army ever. I was watching you fire at a few tree trunks, and I must say, you are very well-skilled with the bow and arrow.” Vallug looked down at the ground. “My father taught me.” “A wise beast your father must be.” Scar said. Vallug looked up proudly. “He is the best!” Scar nodded. “I was wondering, would you like to join my army? I see that you live in a poor house.” Vallug thought for a moment. It was true that they lived in a poor part of the forest, and maybe joining an army can help them a bit. “I’ll ask my father.” Scar unsheathed his claws. “Oh no, no, no. You can’t.” “Why not?” Vallug asked. Scar started to inspect his claws. “Sadly, to join my army, you must pass certain tests.” “What kind of tests?” Vallug asked. Scar looked at him, an evil glint in his eyes. “You must kill your father.” Vallug froze. Scar smiled an evil smile. “This will accomplish several things in one step. It will prove your loyalty to me, not to your father. And if, perhaps, you refuse, I suppose I’ll just kill you both.” Vallug couldn’t move. His mind was in shock. How did this happen!? He has to kill his own father...his best friend. “I’ll give you till noon, how is that for fair?” Scar said. “At noon, me and my army will come and you must decide.” As Vallug walked away, his mind still in shock, Scar called out, “And I wouldn’t try running, I’ll have you both under guard.”
Vallug finally found the courage to tell his father about what Scar had said. His father looked shocked, and somewhat confused. “I don’t understand...I’ve never heard about this so-called army.” His face hardened. “That lion has made up his mind, and there’s nothing I can do to prevent it.” He looked around, then looked down at Vallug. “Listen up, little mate. If I’m gonna die either way, I don’t want you to go with me.” He leaned in close, then took a few deep breaths. “Vallug, I want you to shoot me…I want you to live.” Vallug choked down his tears. “I can’t. I can’t do it, Father.” “Vallug, you have to! Listen to me, I know I won’t survive today, mate, but I need you to live. Show the next generation what a Bowbeast is made of.” His father held back his tears. “You’re a warrior, little matey. You can do this.” A short pause, as he took a deep breath. “I’ll miss you, Vallug.” Vallug swallowed and brushed away the tears. “Are you sure, Daddy?” His father held him closer. “Aye, Vallug, I’m sure.”
A few hours later, Scar and the Evil Ones sat watching as Vallug’s father was tied to a tree, ready to be executed. Scar then stepped forward and announced, “I had found a suitable archer for our army. He is young, but will grow quickly. But first, he must pass a test of killing.” He stepped back and glanced evilly at Vallug, who stood with his head down and a bow in hand. “Vallug: prove your worth. Kill him.” The band of Heartless surrounding the execution site were perfectly silent. Vallug took a deep breath, lip trembling, and looked up. His father looked at him as if to say ‘‘I’m ready.’’ Vallug mouthed “I’m so sorry…” then lifted the bow, aimed, and blinked back a tear. He stood for a moment with his eyes shut tightly. He then took a deep breath, opened his eyes, and fired.
Scar looked at him and smiled. “I think you’ll do well in this army, Vallug.” He walked away with the Heartless. Vallug sank to his knees and stared at the ground for what seemed like an eternity. Finally, he looked up. A crow perched on a branch, and lifted it’s wing, toward the army. Vallug rose, and nodded back. Then he walked over to the army, leaving the body of his father, trainer, and best friend.
Scar was right. Vallug grew quickly. He also changed. Vallug was a new beast; none could become close to him, and after a while, none tried. He became a hardened warrior. Killing didn’t faze him, and he would shoot a Heartless as easily as an enemy. He was a leader in that he was a loner. The Heartless respected him because of his savagery. He hated, because those he loved were taken from him. He was a cruel killer.
But he never forgot his father.
Don't worry, I'll post more soon.
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Post by RandallBoggs on Jun 11, 2006 14:03:00 GMT -5
Wow ^_^ Already starting and got a ton ^_^
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Post by nauticusvergil on Jun 16, 2006 17:21:50 GMT -5
Wow....harsh....hopefully he's not evil forever.
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Post by Veg on Jun 17, 2006 23:05:15 GMT -5
Okay good, I have some reviews. Here is the first chapter to the story.
CHAPTER 1
Randall Boggs crawled down from one of the shops in Main Street U.S.A. He turned his head to one side, listening for anything suspicious. A wind blew in the air. It’s been years since the defeat of Chernabog, but King Mufasa said the evil ones will get a new leader, one more powerful and dangerous than Chernabog. Randall didn’t know anyone more dangerous or powerful than Chernabog. Suddenly, he heard a twig snap. He jumped and withdrew his sword, glinting in the moonlight. He looked around. “Show yourself!” He snapped. Suddenly, two things landed on him. He dropped his sword and fell to the ground. “We caught you, Randall!” A voice said. Randall’s eyes widened. “Jan? Ali?” The two young Toydarians leaped off Randall, smiling. Maria flew down. “Now children,” She said. “What have I told you about not jumping on warriors?” Jan lowered his head. “Sorry Mom. But we gotta practice our surprise techniques if we’re going to be warriors like Dad!” “Where’s Sebulba and Watto?” Randall asked Maria. “Patrolling the borders of Tomorrowland.” Maria said. She looked over at her children. “It’s about time they’re gonna be apprentices.” “Apprentices?” Randall said. Maria nodded. “Those who were born into warrior families will be apprentices to train until they become a warrior. All warriors get to have an apprentice.” “How will they choose?” Randall asked. “The warriors who are gonna get apprentices go to the squirting pond and see who their apprentice will be.” Maria explained. “Each apprentice has it’s own little object.” “Like what?” Randall asked. Maria thought for a moment. “Well, for Ali, it’s a tiny pink flower. For Jan is a stone with black spots.” “It’s the coolest stone you ever saw!” Jan said, flaring his wings with pride. Randall nodded. “I see.” Suddenly, there was a honking noise. Then voices. “Come back here you crazy toad! You’re gonna get yourselves and others killed!” Randall squinted in the darkness. A motorcar was coming towards them at high speed. Quickly, he pushed the Toydarian family to one side and leaped away just in time. “Tally ho! Tally ho!” A voice came from the motorcar as it sped away. Then five weasels were chasing after it. Randall leaped up. “I’ll be right back.” He told Maria. He raced after the motorcar. “Smart Guy!” He shouted. The leader of the weasels, looked back. “Hi Randall!” He panted. “What’s going on?” Randall asked, racing up besides him. “Mr. Toad has gone wild again!” A crazed weasel, Psycho, said. “He stole another motorcar!” Randall bit his lips and raced toward the side of the motorcar. He then leaped in. “Get off you toad!” He shouted at Mr. Toad. Mr. Toad ignored him and kept on steering. Greasy then leaped in and grabbed onto the wheel. “Get the keys!” He said to Randall. Randall grabbed onto the keys and turned. The motorcar screeched into a stop. After things were settled down and all, Smart Guy threatened Mr. Toad if he touched one more motorcar, he would personally put him in a mailing box and send him all the way to the deserts of Tatooine. “That way,” Spike growled. “You can race all the cars you want and nobody gets hurt!” Mr. Toad bowed. “I apologize, wise warrior. And I also say that my motorcar days are done.” He then walked off. “Well that’s good news!” Wheezy grumbled. “So, how are you Randall?” Stupid asked. “Do you like being a warrior?” “Well of course he does!” Psycho said. “If he didn’t liked it, he would have quit right away!” “Are you guys gonna get apprentices?” Randall asked. “Well sure.” Smart Guy said. “It could be fun to train someone else to become a warrior.” “Speaking of which,” Greasy said. “We should get going to the squirting pond. They should be starting soon.” So the six warriors walked toward Adventureland, where the squirting pond was located.
Hah, I made Ali and Jan grow up to eight year olds. ;D
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Post by RandallBoggs on Jun 18, 2006 15:12:07 GMT -5
Hehehe ^+^
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Post by Veg on Jun 25, 2006 1:50:21 GMT -5
Okay, sorry it took this long. I'm sorry if I made stupid decisions for the apprentices.
CHAPTER 2
At the pond, Randall was amazed and delighted on how many warriors there were. Everyone he had known was there. The three hyenas, Shenzi, Banzai and Ed. Sela and her two children, Chickenhound and Ferncloud. The two rats, Cluny and Gurrad. Badrang the stoat. The three weasels, Fleabane, Rotnose and Hisk. Skalrag the fox. Scroop the Mantavor. Sebulba and Watto. “Randall!” Randall turned his head and his heart leaped with happiness at the sight of his old friend. He raced over. “Audrey 2!” He said. “How are you?” “Fine and dandy!” Audrey 2 said, waving his vines in the air. “Here for an apprentice too?” Randall nodded. “Aren’t you excited?” Audrey 2 shrugged. “Excited, nervous, tense, you name it!” “Why would you be nervous?” Randall asked. “You can never tell which apprentice picks you.” Audrey 2 said. “Besides, you can be nervous on how well you train your apprentice. The hyenas are extremely worried because Simba will be an apprentice. Simba is Mufasa’s son.” Randall looked over at the hyenas. They were looking around with nervous looks. Randall then started to get nervous. Should he ask his parents which apprentice would be suitable for him? He closed his eyes and concentrated on the question. Then he heard his mother’s soft laugh. Oh no my son, that is their decision. Randall opened his eyes and sighed. “All right mom, I won’t complain about the apprentice I get.” Then there was a roar. The warriors stopped talking and looked. The great king, Mufasa stood on a boulder. “Stand near the water’s edge.” He ordered. The warriors went to the water’s edge. “You are here to see who your apprentice will be.” Mufasa said. “Although all of you were defenders and didn’t had mentors before you became warriors, I know that you will teach these apprentices well.” Mufasa then raised a paw. “Now, behold your apprentices.” The water then bubbled and out came some small bundles. One bundle landed in front of Randall. “What do we do now?” Randall asked Audrey 2. Audrey 2 gulped. “Unwrap them and see who it is.” Everyone began to unwrap the bundles. Then the air was filled with exclamations. “I got an orange ball with black stripes! Holy cow! I got Tigger!” "This piece of copper is so beautiful. Great Phlox! I did got Copper!” “A pink bow!” “A CROWN!!! I GOT SIMBA!!!” “I got Ali!” “A stone with black spots. I got Jan.” “A black cap!” Audrey 2 said, poking a black cap. “I got Greedy!” He looked at Randall. “Who’s yours?” “I don’t know.” Randall said. “Come on Randall,” Audrey 2 said. “I’m sure it can’t be that bad.” Randall took a deep breath and unwrapped it. A white stick that looked like a deer’s antlers showed.
At the Magic Kingdom, every warrior was gathered to watch the naming ceremony. Randall looked over at the crowd. A black female squirrel caught his eye. Randall knew who it was. Mandurah Vermin-death she called herself. She was the type of squirrel who hated all vermin. Mandurah had a very hostile look on her face as she watched the vermin. She then leaned over to an otter. “I do feel sorry for some of those apprentices,” she said loud enough for the vermin to hear. “Imagine being taught by vermin!” The otter nodded. Randall felt Skalrag bristle near him. “Just ignore her,” He whispered. Mufasa and his wife, Sarabi, called all the apprentices. Mufasa called the first one up. A small female humanoid with bandanas and no lower body walked forward. Mufasa looked down at the humanoid. “Birdbrain Mary, you have the courage and fierceness of a warrior, but you still need a lot to learn. Shenzi will be your mentor.” Shenzi walked forward and looked down at Birdbrain Mary. Birdbrain Mary grinned with excitement. “Shenzi,” Mufasa said, “Do you accept Birdbrain Mary as your apprentice?” Shenzi looked up at Mufasa and nodded. “Yes.” Both mentor and apprentice walked over to the other side of the room. A one eyed alien came next. “Pigors,” Sarabi said. “You have cheerfulness, which is good in any warrior. But you must learn fierceness and determination. Greasy will be your mentor.” Greasy walked forward and looked at Pigors. Pigors looked at Greasy with admiration. Greasy looked at the king and queen. “King Mufasa and Queen Sarabi, I accept this alien as my apprentice.” The lions nodded. Greasy and Pigors joined Shenzi and Birdbrain Mary. Then an octopus-like alien came next. “Mr. Turnbuckle,” Mufasa said. “You have skills, and speed and courage. But one day you will meet an enemy that is all those. Smart Guy will mentor you.” Smart Guy stepped forward. Mr. Turnbuckle dipped his head, a sign of respect. Smart Guy nodded. “I accept this alien as my apprentice.” They joined the other mentors and apprentices. A huge fat alien then came forward. “Meltdown,” Sarabi said. “You have a fierce warrior spirit, but you need to learn speed. Stupid will mentor you.” Stupid walked up to Meltdown and stared at the huge fat alien. “Do you accept Meltdown your apprentice?” Sarabi asked. Stupid looked at her and nodded. “Yeah.” They walked to the other side of the room while a big, gassy-like alien. “Mr. Snuff,” Mufasa said, “you will need to learn the warrior code in order to be a warrior. Ed will mentor you.” Ed went over to Mr. Snuff and grinned. Mr. Snuff did his little raspberry noises. Ed looked at Mufasa and nodded. They went to join the other apprentices and mentors. A lizard-like alien with his eyes in his mouth, stepped forward. “Mackriki,” Sarabi said, “You have the spirit of a cheerful warrior, but you still need to learn patience. Wheezy will mentor you.” Wheezy went over to Mackriki and looked at him for a moment. Mackriki shifted from foot to foot with eagerness. Wheezy nodded. “I accept this one as my apprentice.” They walked off. A chameleon-like alien went up. “Dogbreath,” Mufasa said, “You have a lot to learn of being a warrior, things that we hope you will remember. Hisk will mentor you.” Hisk went over to Dogbreath. Dogbreath blinked at him. Hisk nodded. “I accept him as an apprentice.” They joined the others. A blue alien raced forward. “Greedy,” Sarabi said, “you have the swiftness like a warrior, but remember, it is not always war and weapons to be a warrior. Audrey 2 will mentor you.” Audrey 2 went over to Greedy and nudged his head. Greedy lowered his head. Audrey 2 nodded. “He will do for my apprentice.” An anglerfish/tyrannosaurs alien with no torso stepped forward. “Aquanoggin,” Mufasa said, “we were all surprised when you decided to be an apprentice. Most of the time, you stayed apart from others. Ferncloud will mentor you.” Ferncloud went over to Aquanoggin and looked down at him. Aquanoggin stared up at her. Ferncloud nodded. "He's suitable to be a warrior." A six-eyed alien came up. “Mr. Onus,” Sarabi said, “you are a timid creature, but have skills on herbs. Sela will mentor you.” Sela went over to Mr. Onus. Onus looked up at her with his six eyes. Sela nodded. “You will be a fine healer one day.” Then a pink little blob floated in the air. “Morph,” Mufasa said. “You have the kindness like a warrior, but you need to learn fierceness. Fidget will mentor you.” Fidget flew over to Morph and studied him a bit. Morph flew around Fidget, chittering with happiness. Fidget grinned. “You are the perfect apprentice for me!” They flew off to the other mentors and apprentices. A rabbit went forward. “Brer Rabbit,” Sarabi said. “You were under a spell to the evil ones for two months. But that didn’t stopped your courage. Cluny will mentor you.” Cluny went forward and looked down at Brer Rabbit. Brer Rabbit looked up with excitement. Cluny nodded. “I accept this rabbit as my apprentice.” They went off. A small tiger bounced forward. “Tigger,” Mufasa said. “You have the swiftness as a warrior and fierceness. But you still need a lot to learn. Psycho will mentor you.” Psycho went forward. Tigger crouched down and his tail wiggled a bit with excitement. Psycho nodded. “I accept this tiger as an apprentice.” They went off. A small orange lion cub then raced forward. The lion cub looked up at his mother. “Simba, my son,” Sarabi said, “I can see you will become a great warrior one day and a fine king. But you need a lot to learn. Banzai will mentor you.” Banzai stood there and nervously took a step forward. Simba raced forward and touched his nose with Banzai’s nose. Banzai gulped and nodded. A pale lion cub stepped forward. “Nala,” Mufasa said, “you are my son’s dearest friend, and skillful when you play-fight with him. Badrang will mentor you.” Badrang stepped forward and nodded at Nala. Nala smiled at him. “I accept this lion cub as my apprentice.” Badrang said to Mufasa. After Badrang and Nala joined the other apprentices and mentors, a small deer went forward. “Bambi,” Sarabi said, “you are young and curious. A sign which shows a good apprentice. Randall will mentor you.” Randall was about to go over, when Bambi raced over and lifted his nose up. “Not yet!” Randall hissed. The fawn went back to where he was standing. Randall went forward and looked down at his apprentice. Bambi looked up at him with wide brown eyes. Randall could tell he will be a great warrior someday. He nodded. “I accept this fawn as my apprentice.” They walked toward the other mentors and apprentices. “So when are we gonna start training, Randall?” Bambi asked. “I want to learn about everything! Fighting, swiftness, the borders of the Disney Kingdom—” “All in a good time.” Randall told him. Another fawn went forward. “Faline,” Mufasa said. “You are kind and happy. That will make you into a gentle warrior. But in some days, you must learn the ferociousness of a warrior. Scroop will mentor you.” Scroop walked forward and looked down at Faline. Faline lifted her head, and her head accidently bonked Scroop’s jaw. Scroop took a step back. Randall heard a few snickers of amusement. Scroop frowned at Faline. Faline looked up at him with a smile. Scroop looked at Mufasa. “I accept his fawn for an apprentice.” Scroop and Faline joined the mentors and apprentices. “Nice meeting with your apprentice!” Smart Guy whispered to Scroop. “Oh hush up.” Scroop growled, rubbing his jaw. A small fox cub went forward. “Todd,” Sarabi said. “You were brought here as a tiny orphaned cub. But that didn’t stopped your determination and courage. Rotnose will mentor you.” Rotnose went over to Todd. Todd stared up at his green bag nose. Rotnose nodded. “I accept this fox cub as my apprentice.” They went to the other apprentices and mentors. A small bloodhound puppy came next. “Copper,” Mufasa said, “your sense of smell is a fine skill for a future warrior. But you need more skills than that. Fleabane will mentor you.” Fleabane went over to Copper. Copper wagged his tail with happiness. Fleabane nodded. “I accept this pup for an apprentice.” They joined the others. Maria nudged Ali forward. Ali flew forward. “Ali,” Sarabi said, “your father is a brave warrior, and we know you will have the same skills as your father. Watto, your father, will mentor you.” Watto flew over to Ali and looked down at her with pride. Ali smiled at him. “King Mufasa,” Watto said, “I will accept my daughter as an apprentice.” Watto and Ali went to the other mentors and apprentices. “Congratulations Watto.” Randall whispered. Watto nodded. Maria nudged Jan forward. Jan flew forward and waited for his mentor. “Jan,” Mufasa said, “you have a lot of courage like your father. Sadly, I cannot let you have the same mentor as your sister, so your father’s dear friend, Sebulba, will mentor you.” Sebulba went forward and lowered his head at Jan. Jan nodded respectfully at Sebulba. Sebulba stood straight up. “I accept Jan as my apprentice.” Sebulba and Jan joined the other mentors and apprentices. Watto hugged both of his children with pride. Maria flew over and Watto embraced her. A small white female kitten with pink bows walked forward. “Marie,” Sarabi said, “we know that you say ladies do not start fights, but some ladies need to fight evil. Skalrag will mentor you.” Skalrag walked forward and looked down. Marie looked up and flicked her tail. Skalrag nodded. “I accept this kit as my apprentice.” Marie licked a paw nervously. The mentor and apprentice joined the others. A small black kitten with a red ribbon walked forward. “Berlioz, you have fine swiftness and skills for a small kitten. Gurrad will mentor you.” Gurrad walked forward and looked at his apprentice. Berlioz’s blue eyes shone with excitement. Gurrad nodded. “I accept this black kit as my apprentice.” Both mentor and apprentice joined the others. Finally, an orange kitten went forward. “Toulouse,” Sarabi said, “You have the fierceness like a wild cat, but you need to learn to calm yourselves. Chickenhound will mentor you.” Chickenhound stepped forward and looked at his apprentice. Toulouse shifted paw to paw with excitement. Chickenhound nodded. “I accept this kit as my apprentice.” They joined the others. Mufasa stood in front of the warriors. “Warriors, teach these young ones well, and someday you will see them become warriors.” The warriors nodded.
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Post by RandallBoggs on Jun 25, 2006 15:42:57 GMT -5
WOW.
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Post by Veg on Jun 26, 2006 19:32:03 GMT -5
Is Randall okay with the chapter and his apprentice?
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Post by RandallBoggs on Jun 27, 2006 14:49:13 GMT -5
Bambi as an apprentice?
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Post by Veg on Jul 3, 2006 2:23:21 GMT -5
Ehh...yeah. Anyway, here's the other chapter and I hope it's not anymore as stupid.
CHAPTER 3
The next morning, Randall went over to a thicket and looked in. “Bambi?” There was a shuffling noise and Bambi poked his head out. “Training.” Randall said. Bambi scrambled out. “I’m ready!” He said. “Are you hungry?” Randall asked, unsure if he should tell Bambi to eat. Bambi shook his head. “No!” “Oh, alright.” Randall said. “Well, I’m gonna show you the Disney Kingdom.” “Where to?” Bambi asked. Randall turned his head. “I thought maybe Adventureland. Now follow me and—” Bambi then raced off toward Adventureland. “I said follow!” Randall cried, racing after him. Bambi stopped at the entrance of Adventureland. “Wow!” He whispered as Randall went up to him. He then looked up at Randall. “Wouldn’t the humans see us?” “Humans can’t see us.” Randall said. “We’re invisible to their eyes. Now follow me to New Orleans Square. And this time, I mean follow!” Randall wove through the crowd with Bambi obediently following. Randall turned to look at a huge oak tree. Cluny had a helmet with stag horns and was marking on the oak while Brer Rabbit watched with interest. He then took a deep breath, and put his head against the oak and moved his head up and down, trying to copy Cluny’s movements. Cluny stopped and lifted the visor from his eye. Brer Rabbit looked up and grinned, his head-fur messed up. Cluny smiled with amusement. At New Orleans Square, Randall showed Bambi the Haunted Mansion. “Is that where the ghosts live when it’s daylight?” Bambi asked. Randall nodded. “Toulouse said that he saw the ghosts come out at night during a full moon.” Bambi said. “Did he now?” Randall said. Bambi nodded. “He said so himself.” “Well,” Randall said, “you can’t believe everyone you know.” He started off. “Come on, we’ll go around to—” Then a hornbill came flying in. He cleared his throat. “Ahem, ahem. Sorry to interrupt young warrior, but the King and Queen needs to see you.” Randall frowned and looked at Bambi. “Bambi, why don’t you go over to the meadow and see if other apprentices are there.” “But I wanna come with you.” Bambi said. “Yes,” Randall said, “but the King and Queen need to see me for some reason, so go on and wait.” Bambi nodded and trotted off.
At the castle, Randall stood in front of King Mufasa and Queen Sarabi. “You wanted to see me?” Randall asked. “Yes,” Mufasa said. “As you know, some warriors have one apprentice.” “But,” Sarabi said, “there is one apprentice who needs a mentor.” “That is why we ask you if you can handle two apprentices.” Randall frowned. Two apprentices? He wondered how two apprentices will be like. A lot of work, but could it be worth it? “If you don’t want to,” Mufasa said, “then we under----” “No, no!” Randall said. “I’ll do it.”
At the meadow, Bambi was greeted by Jan and Todd. “Done with your apprentice task?” Jan asked. “Kinda.” Bambi said. “But Randall had to go off to see the King and Queen.” Todd’s eyes widened. “What an honor! Young warriors rarely get to see the King and Queen. Only elderly warriors do!” “I’m gonna be the best warrior in the whole kingdom!” Jan said, eyes widening with excitement. “Nothing is gonna scare me!” Then a young fawn jumped down and grinned. “Boo!” Jan did a little yelp and almost fell off. The fawn laughed. “Looks like I scared you out of your skin!” Todd and Bambi stared at him. “Who are you?” Todd asked. “Name’s Ronno.” The fawn said. “And these are the boys.” He stabbed a tree with his half-grown antlers. “Stab and Jab.” Todd frowned and walked off. “Well you three have fun.” “I wouldn’t go there if I were you.” Ronno said. “That’s where I saw the Heartless.” The apprentices stared at him. “You saw the Heartless?” Bambi said. “Uh-huh.” Ronno said. “There I was, minding my own business. When suddenly, I hear a voice calling, ‘He’s here! He’s here!’ You see, the Heartless has this crow, that tell them where a warrior is. But I was too smart for them. So I crept slowly up to them. And POW! I jabbed them with my trusty antlers.” None of the apprentices were impressed. “Unbelievable.” Bambi said. Ronno glared at him. “You calling me a liar?” Bambi shook his head. “No.” “You wanna fight?” Ronno said, lowering his head. “A warrior doesn’t fight unless he needs to!” Jan said. “Just one little tussle.” Ronno said, narrowing his eyes at Bambi. Suddenly, they heard Randall’s voice. “Bambi! Bambi!” Then another voice called out, “Todd!” Bambi stood up. “That’s my mentor.” “Yeah, mine too.” Todd said. “See you guys later.” He walked off toward Rotnose. Jan flew off. “Gotta go. Sebulba is waiting to start my training.” Ronno sneered. “Bambi? Isn’t that a girls name?” Bambi glared at him and went over to Randall. “Hi Randall.” Bambi greeted his mentor. “What are we doing today?” “Let me tell you something first.” Randall said. “I agreed to take on another apprentice.” Bambi’s ears straightened up. “Who?” Randall took a deep breath and called, “Ronno! Ronno, come over here!” Bambi staggered back as Ronno came up to Randall. “Ready to start training?” Randall asked. The fawn nodded. Ronno then turned to Bambi and did a triumphant grin.
Yeah, a friend of mine has seen Bambi 2 and she liked Ronno from the start, so she asked me if I could put it in my fanfic and well, I couldn't say no.
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Post by RandallBoggs on Jul 3, 2006 14:07:07 GMT -5
“If you don’t want to,” Mufasa said, “then we under----” “No, no!” Randall said. “I’ll do it.”
Hhehehehe!
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Post by Veg on Jul 5, 2006 2:54:21 GMT -5
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Post by nauticusvergil on Jul 5, 2006 12:05:36 GMT -5
I remember this show. ^_^
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Post by RandallBoggs on Jul 5, 2006 14:14:45 GMT -5
Hmm.
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Post by Veg on Jul 5, 2006 14:31:05 GMT -5
Hey Remy, how do you like the story so far?
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