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Post by RandallBoggs on Jul 8, 2006 20:42:53 GMT -5
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Post by Veg on Jul 8, 2006 20:53:20 GMT -5
Yeah, in the Dragon Tamer thread. Which reminds me, I really gotta get off my lazy rear and write another chapter of that!
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Post by RandallBoggs on Jul 8, 2006 20:54:29 GMT -5
OH! YEAH!
Remember the ideas I pitched to ya? ^_^
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Post by Veg on Jul 8, 2006 20:56:16 GMT -5
Yeah! ;D Hey Sean, how do you feel about the baby ferret thing?
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Post by RandallBoggs on Jul 8, 2006 20:58:42 GMT -5
Weird heh ^_^
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Post by nauticusvergil on Jul 8, 2006 21:08:40 GMT -5
Okay here's the review, now your sister won't kill you ^_-
Yeah one of the best yet, heh, this just keeps getting better and better, and you can always trust otters ;D
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Post by Veg on Jul 8, 2006 21:10:42 GMT -5
Well some of them.
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Post by nauticusvergil on Jul 8, 2006 21:11:48 GMT -5
Hey! I like otters.....they're close to weasels ;D
Yeah will Veil grow up?
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Post by Veg on Jul 8, 2006 21:13:25 GMT -5
Yeah, he will. Eventually. And don't worry, I don't think ALL otters are evil! I just don't like the fact that they think all vermin are evil.
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Post by nauticusvergil on Jul 8, 2006 21:18:04 GMT -5
Heheh, not ALL of them do ^_-
Oh, that'll be cool to see this kid grow up ;D
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Post by Veg on Jul 9, 2006 1:15:14 GMT -5
Okay, I've got the other chapter written down and I don't think I'll be posting up anymore for the next two weeks because I'm going on a two week camping trip! Okay, here it is.
CHAPTER 7
Bambi frolicked through the meadow that evening. All apprentices gathered in the huge meadow after a day of training before going home and resting. Bambi lowered his head and nibbled on some sweet grass. Far ahead, Ronno was bragging about his skills he learned during training. Bambi crept in closer to listen. “I can stab anything to shreds.” Ronno bragged. “All those Heartless better beware of me when I’m around.” “Same with me.” Brer Rabbit said. “I can’t wait to be a warrior! I’m gonna be fierce and strong like Cluny.” Greedy laughed. “Yeah, Cluny’s tail with your tail? Not likely.” Brer Rabbit scowled. “I’m gonna be a brave warrior too.” Toulouse said. “Just look at my warrior fierceness!” His fur puffed out. He hissed and spat. “Did your mentor taught you that?” Dogbreath asked. Ronno then looked at Bambi. “What about you, Bambi? Are you gonna be a brave warrior?” “I hope so.” Bambi said. Ronno snorted. “Doubt it, since you are a bit of a coward.” “What are you talking about?” Bambi asked. “Only brave warriors are needed.” Ronno said. “I am already brave.” Bambi felt his temper rise. “Oh yeah? Well—” Then the apprentices heard voices, calling their names. “There are our mentors,” Todd said. “We should go to them so they can take us home.” “Yeah, you go on ahead.” Bambi said. “I’m gonna go into the Evil One’s territory.” All the apprentices gasped. “You can’t go in the Evil Ones territory.” Copper said. “They will take your heart away! Like they did with our mentors.” “And our mentors are calling us.” Berlioz said. Bambi twitched his ears. He could hear Randall’s voice. “Bambi...Ronno...” “We’ll only go in for a quick moment.” Bambi said. “Right, Ronno?” All the apprentices looked at Ronno. Ronno looked at all of them. Bambi shrugged. “Well, never mind. I guess I’ll go alone.” “Wait!” Ronno said. In a gruff tone he said, “I’m coming with you!”
“I knew this was a dumb idea.” Ronno grumbled as they raced to the Evil One’s territory. Bambi hated the way Ronno could leap over fallen objects in a single bound, while he had to scramble up. “What if the Evil Ones get us?” Ronno asked. “We’re deers.” Bambi said. “Deers can run faster than anything.” Ronno grunted. Then they stopped. In front of them lay a vast desert-like terrain, with dead trees and foggy clouds. The two fawns stood staring. “Well, aren’t we going in?” Bambi asked. Ronno stepped back. “It’s too dangerous. Why not go back and say we did.” “You’re not scared, are you?” Bambi challenged. Bambi turned back to the territory and took a step. Then he took another one, going in deeper. “I...I can’t!” Ronno said. He then turned and ran off. Bambi felt strangely disappointed. He then went in closer, ears perked in case of danger. He should really go back, but he needed to do something brave so Randall could be impressed. He went in deeper still.
Randall raced through the meadow, searching for his apprentices. “Bambi! Ronno!” Ronno then came running up. Randall grabbed him. “Where were you?!” He said. “Where’s Bambi?” Ronno looked up at him, panting heavily. “Bambi has gone into the Evil One’s territory!” “What?” Randall exclaimed, staring at him. He did a frustrated growl. “Okay, go back to where the other apprentices and mentors are. I’ll get there as soon as I can with Bambi.” He raced off.
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Post by Veg on Jul 24, 2006 13:57:33 GMT -5
Review, please?
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Post by RandallBoggs on Jul 24, 2006 13:59:27 GMT -5
Now you know how I feel ^_^
Anyway. Sorry. Didn't notice you updated this ^_^ So far, looks like Randall's gonna have his hands full ^_^
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Post by Veg on Jul 24, 2006 14:00:30 GMT -5
Yeah. ;D Cal? What about you?
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Post by Veg on Jul 26, 2006 23:02:14 GMT -5
Well, I'll just post up a new chapter now.
CHAPTER 8
Bambi stared up at a huge towering tree, branches stretched out as if reaching to grab him. He shuddered. The trees looked a lot more evil than the trees in the Haunted Mansion. Then he heard a voice. “Here! He’s here!” Bambi froze. “Hello?” “Here! Here!” Then a great crow flew above him. “Here! He’s here!” Suddenly, something landed near Bambi. It was Randall. “Run, now!” He hissed. His voice sounded so angry, Bambi obeyed instantly. He raced after his mentor as evil voices followed them. “Don’t look back!” Randall warned. Bambi looked. Dark evil shapes followed them, with yellow eyes. The mentor and apprentice raced into Disney territory. The Heartless stopped dead, howling with anger. Then they turned and raced back to their own territory. Randall turned to Bambi. “Are you all right?” Bambi nodded. Randall glared at him. “What were you doing out there?!” Bambi looked down. “Ronno was saying stuff. I wanted to do something—” Randall interrupted. “That was a foolish thing you did! You could have been killed, just like that!” Randall snapped his fingers. “Never, do anything like that again. Ever!” Bambi lowered his head. “I’m sorry.” Zazu then came flying in. “Are you all right?” Randall nodded. “Good.” Zazu said. “The king and queen asks for you and your apprentice to come.” “But only warriors get to see the king and queen.” Bambi said. “Yes,” Zazu said. “And apprentices who went into Evil Ones territory. So come along.” Randall looked at Bambi. With a sigh, they followed Zazu to the castle.
At the castle, the two lions sat on their thrones, staring stone-faced at the mentor and apprentice. “Your apprentice had been sighted near the Enemy’s territory.” King Mufasa said. “What do you have to say?” “Just curiosity, your majesty.” Randall said. “He made a foolish bet with Ronno.” “Where is Ronno?” Sarabi asked. “He’s safe.” Randall said. “He had the sense to come back.” Bambi frowned. The sense? Ronno was scared! “Yet Bambi stayed.” Mufasa said. Randall nodded. “Yes.” Mufasa turned to the young apprentice. “What do you have to say?” Bambi lowered his head. “It was a really...bad idea. I’m sorry, your majesty.” Mufasa nodded. “Go now, but do not attempt to do anything like that again.” Randall and Bambi left the castle. “We made a really great escape, didn’t we?” Bambi asked. “Fascinating.” Randall mumbled. “Are you still mad?” Bambi asked. Randall shook his head. “No, but I don’t want you to end up like those warriors that were killed because of their recklessness.” Then they heard a voice. “Halt! Who goessss there?” Randall rolled his eyes. “Asmodeus, it’s just us!” Asmodeus slithered out from the shadows. “Hello, Randall.” He hissed. Bambi nudged Randall. “Who’s that?” “Asmodeus.” Randall said. Asmodeus lifted raised himself up a bit higher with pride. “Can you believe it Randall? I am a defender!” Randall smiled. “That’s great!” Asmodeus nodded. “The King and Queen sssaid if I can prove myssself to be a great fighter, then can pronounce me assss a warrior.” Randall smiled, recalling the day when he was made into a defender. Then, Ferncloud came running up, her shoulder bleeding. “Randall!” She gasped. Randall became alarmed. “What is it?” Ferncloud panted. “We...we’re being attacked!”
Hahah, cliff-hanger. ;D
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