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Post by RandallBoggs on Apr 12, 2005 14:20:28 GMT -5
Will be up incredibly soon ^_^
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Post by RandallBoggs on Apr 12, 2005 14:51:01 GMT -5
Boo ya! I'm good. Ok. The story begins like normal. We enter into Montressor SpacePort to get our ship, but find ourselves getting caught in an unfortunate situation.....where the heck is the ship!? ^_^ OH! To note, the descriptions are slightly vauge do to little picture reference. And this "part" of Jims life (if you looking at it from Treasure Planet's point of view) is a few years after the events of Treasure Planet. Enjoy ^_^
Chapter 1 New Suits, New Ship The portal opened up into an alley way, quickly reminding Randall of his home again, as the three stayed in the alley, not caring to look out at the moment. “Hey!” Vee exclaimed, looking over himself. Sean and Randall did the same. They were all dressed in different attire. Vee was wearing gold rings on his head “intennas”. He had an eye patch going across his left eye, simple fashion, and had a belt around his waist, above his tail, though it seemed kinda useless with no pants. Sean was wearing a full set. A brown light shirt under a light dark blue zip coat. A red belt with a golden buckle, brown pants, and boots with the same design as the belt. Randall was wearing nearly the same, limited to the upper attire. He was wearing a white shirt with a blue shirt over it, and light blue couplets for each end of the sleeve, both heading down to his waist, near his stomach. Conveniently enough, it was accustomed to Randall’s “unique” want of attire, having holes for all hands. “Does anybody wonder where this stuff comes from?” Sean asked, looking over. “I’m hoping we can keep this….there’s a big tab for saving worlds you know….besides….I hardly find any shirts that fit good….” Randall said to himself with a grin, adjusting his shirt. “Hey guys! Check it out!”. The two turned to Vee, who was looking out the alleyway. Joining him, they looked out together. “Wow….”. It was an amazing site. Sean had been told that the place would remind him of pirates and sailing ships, but he didn’t expect this. Array of people and creatures, aliens, walked the streets, some walking, others heaving barrels, many rushing with documents and different people selling and buying stuff. There were several buildings, seeming to be either homes or shops. The main color was white here. Far off, the buildings and walkways seemed to cut off, like the place was under construction….but how….it was a world right? Randall looked behind them and pointed out a huge building, which reminded him of Monstropolis’s Art Gallery. It was a huge cylinder building with a circular top, adorned with bronze tops and blue lit windows. The three gaped and gasped as a shadow passed by them over head. But this wasn’t a bird….it was a ship. To the untrained eye….it was a ship modeled after those of the sailing ages, where exploration was keen. But this one….they each could tell, especially Randall, that it was modified and cleaned up to be presented as new. Plus….who could miss the three thruster engines and the fact that it was space and not water. “Ho ho…wow…” Randall said to himself. He was beginning to feel at home here, as were they all. “Alright…the King said this the Spaceport….” Sean started, looking back at Randall and down at Vee. “He says that our ship is in port 17…”. “And how the heck do you suppose we find it?” Randall asked, slightly annoyed about him not noticing the place’s vast space…..in space. “Uhh….wing it….” Sean said. Randall grinned like a Cheshire cat. “You mind if…I get us their quickly?”. “If your thinking of shaking it out of someone we’re gonna have a brawl in five seconds…” Vee said, eyes on all the people and creatures walking around out of the alleyway. “Bring it on!” Randall said, raising his fists and punching like a boxer. “We fight Heartless….not innocents Ran…” Sean reminded. “Thanks….go ahead and spoil my fun…” Randall said, displeased, dropping all his hands. “Come on…lets ask around….somebody’s gotta tell us….”.
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Post by RandallBoggs on Apr 12, 2005 14:52:23 GMT -5
* Sean found himself sitting against the central pole of one of the Spaceport’s many “squares”, watching as several creatures and people walked by. He didn’t like thinking to himself in crowds….always found himself uncomfortable without someone he knew. His mind just wanted some company he supposed….but it was what it wanted to talk about that Sean didn’t want to respond to. “I counted 638 jerk offs, 16 yells or screams, your pick, and four drunks…” Randall reported, trying to sound exact. “Same….” Vee said, rubbing his tail. Sean folded his arms, still with a foot to the pole in a shaken mood. “I’m starting to miss New York about now….” Sean said to himself, comparing the two cities. “Great….now how are we suppose to find the ship….” Randall yelled, flinging his arms up high, his fronds and tail joining. “It could leave any time…” Vee added in agreements. Sean shrugged. “I don’t know but….” Sean started. “Hey! You’re the one who brought my suit!”. “W…well…it was buyable and…”. “It was an antique given to me by my aunt’s sister’s brother!”. The three looked over to a scene developing several feet away ahead. A rather large creature with beady eyes and strong brown fists were grasping the rather small turtleneck of a skinner creature. The skinner one, yet tall, reminded Sean of Goofy in a way. He was wearing a white shirt with a gray vest over the top, a cobber bun below his neck, like old fashion English philosophers. The middle of his sleeves had a red ribbon as well. He wore long brown pants and brown shoes in the fashion of leather. His eyes were covered by thin glasses…all Sean could tell so far….he was more concerned with the current situation though. By Randall’s thoughts, he looked like an astrologist or scholar. Nobody seemed to care about the scene, just walked fast to avoid getting into it. “We should help that guy….” Vee said, finger to mouth. Randall scuffed. “Not our business….we got a ship to find….plus fights break out her everyday I bet…”. “Randall” Sean started. “Fine…” Vee said, rubbing his arm like pulling up a sleeve. “I’ll do it myself…”. * “I was holdin it there you little runt! And you lost it in space!?” the broad monster, named Gergon, yelled. “If you could just…bill me for it I could…”. “Oh…no bill for the pay….the bill’s for your head when I….!”. “Hey!”. Gergon looked over across to the square’s center. Standing a few feet away, legs spread, arms balled into fists, tail pointed, eyes pinned, was a small blue, wingless dragon of some sort. “What do you want twerp!?” Gregon yelled. The dragon pointed a clawed finger out. “I want you to put him down…” he said sternly. * Randall and Sean watched Vee’s confrontation. Sean was worried about Vee getting hurt….Randall on the other hand…<br>“….I’ll find an ambulance or something….” Randall said, heading off to look for the nearest place with a plus sign in red. Sean could tell Randall was worried, he could tell in the monster’s eyes. * “Listen runt….you head off now and let me do my business and I’ll forget your interp…inger….”. He looked to the scholar. “What’s that word?”. “Inter…interruption” the scholar replied. “Yeah! What he said!” Gergon yelled, looking back at Vee. Vee crossed his arms, giving a smug look rivaling Randall’s. “What? Afraid you’d get beat by someone smaller and has a bigger vocabulary than you…” he asked, leaning in with a smile. Vee got him. The scholar was slightly surprised at the moment that he didn’t notice he hit the ground, the brute letting go. Gregon fully faced him. “You little punk! I’ll tear your arms off and beat you till your head explodes!”. * Sean stayed where he was, ready to call the Keyblade when Vee asked for it. He knew Vee wanted to do this alone….but he also was worried. Some of the crowd stopped, waiting to see the fight. It was then Sean noticed Randall was in the crowd watching, seeming not to want to show his concern to him….
Kinda weird telling myself in third person huh? Tell me how you like Vee, Randall, and...heh...me...and see if you can guess who this Gergon guy had been talking too ^_^
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Post by fairlyoddnewyorker on Apr 12, 2005 15:24:19 GMT -5
Hehe cool! ;D He was talking to Doppler, of course ... and now that I think of it, he does look like Goofy. Don't know why I never thought of that at first ...
I love this ... I never thought of jumping in after the movie took place- I'm also rather lazy, so I just jump into the story. Problem with mine is- I wanted to leave after they get on the planet, but I need the Item of Unity, which is the map. I can't think of any other ^^; ... so, that's going to be a long chapter- I have to go from start to finish ... unless they could sneak on the ship from the gummi ... that's a thought ...
Anyway, this is cool ;D I never really watched Digimon, but Veemon sounds awesome =) Can't wait to read more ... poor Doppler though =( Hell, I'd pay to be his body-guard anyday, lol ^^
Eek. Now I know why my friends think I'm wierd ... well, they put up with my obsession over Randall, so they'll get used to this ^_^
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Post by RandallBoggs on Apr 12, 2005 15:31:28 GMT -5
Yeah...it was kinda hard trying to get a good description of him, so I tried to think of who he looked like ^_^
Well....originally, I was thinking of heading into the story as it was happening (which I did for the next world, Harry Potter), but reminded that there were....subtle things to tell me not to.
That's the perfect item of unity ^_^
Don't worry. Just do a google search to find what Vee looks like. He's kinda like Randall in a few ways, but doesn't have darker past. He's fun loving and always sticks up for his friends. Your'll see his character develop in this (hence, him helping Doppler) ^_^
Yep! ^_^
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Post by RandallBoggs on Apr 12, 2005 15:32:27 GMT -5
I actually have the next chapter ready really...^_^
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Post by fairlyoddnewyorker on Apr 12, 2005 15:40:24 GMT -5
;D Okay, put it up! ^__^ I'll be sure to if he's nice enough to stick up for Doppler, he's worth liking ^^ lol. Damnit ... I'm obsessed O__O
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Post by RandallBoggs on Apr 12, 2005 15:42:15 GMT -5
"Worth" liking?
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Post by fairlyoddnewyorker on Apr 12, 2005 15:46:41 GMT -5
I meant he sounds nice to stick up for Doppler. So, I'd consider being friends with anyone who's nice to him ^^; ... sorry it didn't make sense at first =/
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Post by RandallBoggs on Apr 12, 2005 15:50:41 GMT -5
Well....oddly enough it sounded like an insult..... Thank you for clearing it up....
I'll get the next chapter on in a few minutes....
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Post by fairlyoddnewyorker on Apr 12, 2005 16:08:13 GMT -5
Err ... =P Sorry about that, I didn't mean that ...
Okay =)
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Post by RandallBoggs on Apr 12, 2005 16:16:53 GMT -5
Ahh...sorry....a bit testy....don't like it when friends are bugged in a way.... It's ok...I'm not mad..... Hopefully Vee'll come across as someone interesting to you.
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Post by fairlyoddnewyorker on Apr 12, 2005 16:28:28 GMT -5
Yeah, I get like that too ...
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Post by RandallBoggs on Apr 12, 2005 16:32:18 GMT -5
Ok then.... Hmm....mom's taking a bit too long.... What the heck...it's a little short anyway...
This chapter is a little fight between Gregon and Vee. I was a little unique with how I handled fights in this than in my other works. The * * symbolize a skill. Think "Sonic" or "Ragnorock" for Sora. Enjoy.....better fights come up later.
Chapter 2 Spoils and Toils The creature, Gregon charged. Vee braced down, then jumped forward, letting a loose cobble stone move from under him. “Try this! *Vee Cannon*!”. Vee stopped in mid-air, circling around till his head faced the ground below, where Gorgan was. “Ha!”. In a rush of blue light, Vee descended toward him like a comet. He hit right into Gregon’s gut with a slight grunt from him. Some of the crowd gasped in surprise. Vee instantly noticed his mistake. He did hurt Gorgan, but not enough that he couldn’t recover from. Gorgan reached out and grasped Vee’s blue tail hard. He was pulled out, Gorgan holding his paining stomach with his other hand. “Gah!” Vee yelled. Gorgan swung him by his tail, hitting Vee’s front body into the ground. Down, he felt surges of pain in his knees, knuckles, stomach, and head. Up, he felt stings at the start of his tail and shakes up his spine. Sean was seriously going to head over after the fourth impact, already off his leaning stance, but Vee had had enough. When the dragon hit the ground for the fifth time, he twisted his body around. He twisted his tail in the grip, but came up with a counter. “*Veeno Slash*!” Vee swiped his arm across Gorgan’s holding arm. A saber of white light for split seconds produced a gash, Gorgan screamed in pain, losing his grip as well. Vee felt something was wrong, but he wanted to take the opportunity to finish this. He ran forward, slamming fists into Gorgan’s stubby shins, then kneecaps. Gorgan kneeled, letting Vee give an uppercut to his head. Gorgan fell over, hitting his head against the rocky. Gorgan breathed slowly, eyes closed, chest heaving. A moment passed with silence, Gorgan’s deep breath the only noise. When the moment was gone, some people in the crowd clapped. They also gave quick gestures to the dragon’s won fight as the crowds dispersed. Sean and Randall started over. Vee was breathing in deep now. “Ehh….ehh….uhh…”. He kneeled down with one leg, his left hand to the ground, his right holding his chest. This only made Sean and Randall run over. Sean kneeled beside him, Randall on Vee’s right. “Vee….you ok?” Sean asked, placing hands on the dragon’s shoulders. He didn’t answer immediately, he just heaved out another breath. “Why that….that…”. The two looked up, seeing the scholar that Vee had helped come over. “That had to be the finest fighting I have ever seen…then again I well…haven’t seen much…” he said. “Yeah….yeah it was…” Sean said, looking back at Vee. “You ok?” Randall said, getting down on six feet, looking up at Vee’s lowered face. He didn’t look so good. Perspiration was going down his face and his mouth was dry, from the sound of his breaths. Randall got back on four, shaking his head at Sean, who only looked back at Vee. The scholar noticed this. “Oh…umm….I am terribly sorry if me and uhh…”. He looked to the fallen giant near them. “Hmm…well….I’m sorry if that big gluttonous elephant harmed him in any….”. “Uhh…my head…” Gorgan mumbled, getting the scholar to slightly yelp. Randall folded his arms, shaking his head. “We’ll need a place to stay….we can’t get on the ship….not in his condition…” he said. Randall was thinking of making a slight sarcastic remark to lighten up the mood, but it didn’t seem to go well right now. “Ship? What ship?”. Sean shook his head. “Port 17…the Legacy something…” he said. The scholars eyes went wide, then a smile. “Ah! I know exactly where you can stay!”. Randall shook his head. “Didn’t you listen Einstein? Our ship leaves today…”. The scholar shook his head back. “Yes yes….but I can reschedule the ship for tomorrow…since you gents helped me out and all…and I wouldn’t think of letting your friend in his condition…He looks so drained….and if I’m not mistaken…his tail looks twisted…”. Randall blinked. “…..’xcuse us…” he said, slithering beside Sean and leaning in. “Think we can trust him?” Randall whispered. Sean nodded. “If he wanted to hurt us….he wouldn’t have needed Vee’s help…”. “Well…that’s true…” Randall reminded. He got back up. “Alright fine….reschedule the thing…”. “What about the place to stay?” Sean asked, looking back at the scholar. “Oh yes…the Benbow Inn on Montressor…”. “Good…we have a place…”. Sean got Vee to his feet, giving a slight piggy-back ride. “What’s your name anyway?” Randall asked, looking at the scholar. “Oh! Forgive me….I’m Doctor Dilbert Doppler….at your service…” Doppler answered.
Yep. Vee got himself into trouble alright. His injury does become part of the story if I remember right....
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Post by fairlyoddnewyorker on Apr 12, 2005 17:00:28 GMT -5
^__^ Cool
By the way, it's Delbert. Just one letter ^^; Could be worse- my brother calls him Gilbert Oo;
Great work ;D
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