Post by RandallBoggs on Apr 11, 2005 17:01:11 GMT -5
Eversince hardly anyone went past chapter 1 of my Kingdom Hearts fic, I stopped it. But I never stopped my ideas.
As a favor to FONY, I was going to do the Treasure Planet part of my Kingdom Hearts fic. Funny enough, its the part right before what I've been giving Light Rises to through E-mail (Harry Potter).
Anyway. I have to admit that there are parts to the story you may not all get (even though this is for FONY, you can all read for your enjoyment), especially since this part happens after a MAJOR event in the fic.
Anyway. Enjoy. This Prologue is reflections on the event that occured, to give you a feel for some of the moments ahead.
Enjoy. OH! And a pic of what Randall will look like in this story is posted at the end. I give credit to Joy for creating it. Though it's not intended for the story, I just couldn't imagine Randall looking like anything else ^_^ Enjoy.
Prologue Chapter: Reflections
“What am I to do? What am I to think…..what am I suppose to say?”.
“The King had given us a way to track Axel and the rest of these Unknowns down. A ship that would be heading to another world boarder, as well as it’s Keyhole. Wishing us luck, we headed to the world to catch the ship….”<br>“…..I didn’t think it was right to be leaving so soon. After….what happened…one would think we need it. I still keep those moments fresh in my head for the longest time. I noticed the look on Randall and Vee’s faces as we heard about what to do next. I kept saying sorry behind my breaths, hoping for forgiveness from them. I hope they knew I was asking….”.
“I want Axel to die……I want him to die for what he did. I remember what he did to me….what I almost…..what I almost tried to do….I……I can’t forgive myself”.
“He killed them. He killed Vee. He….killed Randall. But it felt like I was the one to do it….I was the one. In my mind….that’s what it felt like. I can still remember trying to grasp their heartless bodies….Axel stole their hearts….but….I felt like I should blame myself….”.
“I still remember. Under Darkness’s influence…Axel told me…..told me to kill my friends….told me to kill Randall and Vee. I…..I had done it to Sora. Sora…..I’m so sorry. But Mickey tells me….the Darkness can never take you….not so long as you and Kairi’s hearts are together…..we’ll get you out….”.
“But…..I never would hurt them….my friends….not after what I did to Sora….I didn’t want to do the same to them……Axel. I was feet away as he killed them….stabbing them in the chests with his circle blades. They fell as I ran to them…..but their bodies burst into several sparkles of light before I could touch them……Randall and Vee…..they were dead…..”.
“Drawn into Darkness….I found Axel’s shadow. His…his “Empty Shell”. I fought with the extent my fury heart could….but I couldn’t beat him. He nearly killed me….nearly placed me in Eternal Darkness…..to never get back my heart….my “Empty Shell” broken….but……something happened…”.
“I heard Randall and Vee’s voice call out to me. Their hearts tied with mine….my friends protected me. With my friends by my side in spirit….I destroyed Axel’s Shell. Vee…and Randall….their “Empty Shells”….their bodies….laid in front me…..their hearts tied to mine returned. When they woke up….I grabbed them in an embrace….never wanting to let go of them again…..what I did for few times in my life….I actually…..did……I cried….”.
“Randall and Vee were alive again…their hearts strong with mine lived on…..but….will they ever forgive me?”. –Sean
As a favor to FONY, I was going to do the Treasure Planet part of my Kingdom Hearts fic. Funny enough, its the part right before what I've been giving Light Rises to through E-mail (Harry Potter).
Anyway. I have to admit that there are parts to the story you may not all get (even though this is for FONY, you can all read for your enjoyment), especially since this part happens after a MAJOR event in the fic.
Anyway. Enjoy. This Prologue is reflections on the event that occured, to give you a feel for some of the moments ahead.
Enjoy. OH! And a pic of what Randall will look like in this story is posted at the end. I give credit to Joy for creating it. Though it's not intended for the story, I just couldn't imagine Randall looking like anything else ^_^ Enjoy.
Prologue Chapter: Reflections
“What am I to do? What am I to think…..what am I suppose to say?”.
“The King had given us a way to track Axel and the rest of these Unknowns down. A ship that would be heading to another world boarder, as well as it’s Keyhole. Wishing us luck, we headed to the world to catch the ship….”<br>“…..I didn’t think it was right to be leaving so soon. After….what happened…one would think we need it. I still keep those moments fresh in my head for the longest time. I noticed the look on Randall and Vee’s faces as we heard about what to do next. I kept saying sorry behind my breaths, hoping for forgiveness from them. I hope they knew I was asking….”.
“I want Axel to die……I want him to die for what he did. I remember what he did to me….what I almost…..what I almost tried to do….I……I can’t forgive myself”.
“He killed them. He killed Vee. He….killed Randall. But it felt like I was the one to do it….I was the one. In my mind….that’s what it felt like. I can still remember trying to grasp their heartless bodies….Axel stole their hearts….but….I felt like I should blame myself….”.
“I still remember. Under Darkness’s influence…Axel told me…..told me to kill my friends….told me to kill Randall and Vee. I…..I had done it to Sora. Sora…..I’m so sorry. But Mickey tells me….the Darkness can never take you….not so long as you and Kairi’s hearts are together…..we’ll get you out….”.
“But…..I never would hurt them….my friends….not after what I did to Sora….I didn’t want to do the same to them……Axel. I was feet away as he killed them….stabbing them in the chests with his circle blades. They fell as I ran to them…..but their bodies burst into several sparkles of light before I could touch them……Randall and Vee…..they were dead…..”.
“Drawn into Darkness….I found Axel’s shadow. His…his “Empty Shell”. I fought with the extent my fury heart could….but I couldn’t beat him. He nearly killed me….nearly placed me in Eternal Darkness…..to never get back my heart….my “Empty Shell” broken….but……something happened…”.
“I heard Randall and Vee’s voice call out to me. Their hearts tied with mine….my friends protected me. With my friends by my side in spirit….I destroyed Axel’s Shell. Vee…and Randall….their “Empty Shells”….their bodies….laid in front me…..their hearts tied to mine returned. When they woke up….I grabbed them in an embrace….never wanting to let go of them again…..what I did for few times in my life….I actually…..did……I cried….”.
“Randall and Vee were alive again…their hearts strong with mine lived on…..but….will they ever forgive me?”. –Sean
Excellent! Wish I could write like this ... and the thought of Randall biting Axel's head off sounds pretty sweet ;D