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Post by RandallBoggs on Mar 15, 2006 18:46:25 GMT -5
Interesting. I especially like the part where you talked about Randall's chase and the possibility of a Heartless infection. In reality though Veg...you...aren't that far off...heh heh...
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Post by Veg on Mar 15, 2006 18:51:39 GMT -5
Really? ^_^
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Post by RandallBoggs on Mar 15, 2006 18:52:30 GMT -5
Heh heh...You'll see in Two of A Kind.
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Post by nauticusvergil on Mar 15, 2006 18:53:37 GMT -5
I figured it had to be something like that.
Ran have any comment?
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Post by RandallBoggs on Mar 15, 2006 18:55:13 GMT -5
Heh heh...As said...my stories aren't just eye-candy...true facts lie within if you pay attention.
He doesn't like talking about it really.
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Post by nauticusvergil on Mar 15, 2006 18:58:14 GMT -5
Hmmmm, yes of course, they should be more than eye-candy
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Post by Veg on Mar 15, 2006 19:01:11 GMT -5
Eh...what is Randall's opinion on my fic? Does he hate it?
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Post by RandallBoggs on Mar 16, 2006 18:11:03 GMT -5
"Did I voice already? Oh well....in particuliar I think it's alright...but I have to admit...heh...your clocking in more chapters in a few days than I can in a month heh"
Pay attention to the stories young ones ^_^
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Post by Veg on Mar 18, 2006 23:24:52 GMT -5
I will pay attention to the stories! ;D In fact here is one chapter right now!
CHAPTER 15
Randall stood up and looked around. Where is he? He couldn’t have just gone off seeking Heartless to fight. Watto wasn’t that dim-witted. There was a low hiss. Randall turned around and saw a Mantavor with a group of small black Heartless. The Mantavor was tall, and had a scar running across his left eye. His claws were jagged and sharp. Weather-worn hair hung down behind the bandana he wore. Randall jumped up and drew out his sword. “ATTACK! ATTACK! WE’RE BEING ATTACKED!” The Heartless lunged forward. The camp burst into the sounds of battle. Spike and Psycho slashed at the Heartless with their small swords. Cluny did a war cry and charged forward to a group of Heartless warriors, slaying some with his sword. Brer Rabbit tried to do the same war cry and charged after Cluny to help. Rotnose jabbed his spear into the evil warriors. Scroop lunged at the Heartless, slaying them with his claws. Audrey 2 roared and lunged, biting the Heartless. Randall slashed his sword, striking evil. Suddenly, a Heartless leaped on him, with foul breath. Suddenly, it went flying into the air. A hyena raced after the Heartless, whooping hyena war cries. Banzai, Sela, Chickenhound, Ferncloud and Dummy had joined the fight. “SCROOP!” Audrey 2 suddenly shouted. Randall turned around and saw Scroop and the other Mantavor falling off into a ravine. Randall raced over and jumped down. The Mantavor was standing over Scroop’s body, staring down at him. Scroop was unconscious, barely breathing. “Get away from him!” Randall shouted. The Mantavor looked up. “Lay a claw on him, and I will kill you!” Randall growled. “Kill me if you want.” The Mantavor said. “But I wouldn’t touch anything on him or my name isn’t Sagaxis.” Randall frowned. “Why wouldn’t you touch him?” Sagaxis looked at him, his eyes filled with pain. “Because...he is my son.”
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Post by RandallBoggs on Mar 19, 2006 13:32:41 GMT -5
*gasps* ^_^
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Post by Veg on Mar 30, 2006 17:26:28 GMT -5
I'm posting up this chapter, and I won't be posting until the Saturday after this Saturday because of my vacation, so I'll be gone for like a week. By the way, where is FONY? She should like this!
CHAPTER 16
Randall almost fell with shock. “W-what?” Sagaxis nodded. “While I was fighting him, I saw his eyes and realized it looked like the same eyes my wife had. Then I knew, he was my son.” “Why did you abandon him then?” Randall demanded. Sagaxis sighed. “The Galaxy needed some spacers to fight against these pirates that were terrorizing the planets. I had no choice, I had to leave my family. Scroop didn’t even hatched yet. When I came back, my wife and child were gone. For years I searched for them. But I couldn’t find them and assumed they were killed. Years and years, I wandered, cursing the fate my wife and child had to endure. Chernabog found me and said I will find my son if I joined his army.” Sagaxis looked down at Scroop. “But I didn’t want to find him this way! Not by fighting him!” Randall felt a lump in his throat. “Does he know you are his father?” Sagaxis shook his head. “No.” The noise of battle above grew louder. Randall looked at Sagaxis. “Listen, I won’t tell anybody about your story. Just call off the attack! When the right moment comes, I’ll tell Scroop about you.” Sagaxis smiled gratefully. “Thank you.” He raced up to the top of ravine. “Retreat!” He shouted. “Retreat!” He and the Heartless raced off. The defenders stood frozen. Such a short battle and easy victory? Suddenly, Banzai threw back his head and let out a victory yowl. The defenders shouted their victory cries. “Where’s Scroop?” Sela asked. “Down in the ravine,” Randall said. “He’s badly hurt.” Sela raced down. Watto then came flying. “Where were you?!” Spike said. Watto looked around. “What happened?” “What happened was that we were attacked!” Spike hissed. “Where were you when we needed you?!” Watto scowled. “Off getting supplies!” Randall ignored them and raced down the ravine. Sela was spreading this green mixture on Scroop’s wounds. “How is he?” Randall asked. Sela looked up. “He’s unconscious, but still alive. The wound’s aren’t serious and he will heal quickly.” Scroop then opened his eyes. He screwed them closed with pain. “Aargh! What are you doing Sela? Murdering me?” Sela put her paw on his face. “Just stop complaining and let me apply this on you!” Scroop growled. “You must be joking. This stuff burns like the devil!” “It burns because it is working.” Sela said. “You need rest and you will feel better.” Scroop laid his head down. “Hmph. The only thing that will make me feel better is squeezing your neck with my claws!” Sela hissed playfully at him. “Just try and you’ll see I’m not all healer. I have wild fox in my blood also.” Scroop murmured something but didn’t answered.
Well, that is all for today. I'm off to pack for my vacation. Good-bye until April 8!
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Post by RandallBoggs on Mar 31, 2006 11:46:59 GMT -5
Interesting ^_^
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Post by Veg on Apr 15, 2006 22:36:20 GMT -5
I'm back! Here is the next chapter! And this will explain another form of discrimination.
CHAPTER 17
“You seem quiet today, Randall.” Randall looked at Audrey 2. “What?” They were sitting near Splash Mountain, looking at the people who passed the line. “You never said anything all morning!” Audrey 2 said. Randall shrugged. “Sorry. Just thinking.” “About what?” Audrey 2 asked. “Nothing,” Randall said, still thinking about Sagaxis and Scroop. Fidget came flying in, his ears dripping wet. “Wow, that was fun!” “That was your 6th time going on that ride!” Audrey 2 sighed. “Don’t you ever get tired of it?” “No way!” Fidget grinned. “Splash Mountain is my favorite ride!” Randall then spoked up. “Does anybody even know about Scroop’s past life?” Fidget shook his head. “No, but don’t try to ask him.” “I already did and he nearly bit my head off!” Randall said. Audrey 2 shrugged. “Looks like nobody is gonna know about Scroop’s life.” Fidget’s ears perked up. “The Disney library! Of course! They have the lives of the ones who live here in a big huge book! All you gotta do, is flip through the pages at the S section!” “Really?” Randall said, interested. “Yeah.” Fidget nodded. Audrey 2 straightened up. “Come on then! Lets go!” Randall suddenly noticed Watto flying off. “Where is Watto going?” Audrey 2 shrugged. “Beats me. He has been going out without saying anything.” “I can follow him.” Fidget said. “I can fly silently.” Randall frowned. “Well okay, but don’t let him see you.” Fidget took off. Randall and Audrey 2 went off toward the huge castle. When they almost arrived, Audrey 2 stopped. “Warrior patrols!” He said, getting excited. Randall looked. A cartoon badger and two cartoon squirrels were patrolling the Disney castle. Then Cluny went up to them and spoke something to them. Then, to Randall’s surprise, the badger and squirrels lunged at him and bared their fangs. Cluny raced off, fur bristling with terror. Cluny raced up to the lizard and plant. “Did you see what they did?!” He hissed with astonishment. “I went up to greet them and they chased me off, saying I was a vermin and the woodlanders job was to protect the castle from VERMIN!!!” “Vermin and woodlanders?” Randall said, confused. Cluny narrowed his good eye. “Woodlanders are mice, squirrels, hedgehogs, otters, voles, hares and badgers.” He explained. “Vermin are rats, weasels, stoats, ferrets and foxes. Just because some of us were infected by the Heartless once, doesn’t mean we are all bad!” Audrey 2 gave him a friendly nudge. “Don’t worry. Once we’re warriors, we can go on our own patrol and chase away woodlanders!” Cluny’s tail flicked with pleasure at the thought of that. He nodded and walked off. “What was that about?” Randall wanted to know. Audrey 2 shrugged. “All I do know is that all woodlanders think vermin are cowards, murderers, liars, cheats, bloodthirsty and they will kill their brothers just for a crust of bread.” Randall stared at him. “But that’s crazy! I saw Cluny, Rotnose, Sela, Chickenhound and Ferncloud fight side-by-side with us during that last battle, and none of them were cowardly. Besides, they don’t kill each other for food!” Audrey 2 sniffed. “Try telling that to the woodlanders. But lets not let a thing like that bother us. Come on. Off to find out about someone’s past!”
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Post by nauticusvergil on Apr 15, 2006 22:45:01 GMT -5
Oy, I know all about that.....
Good chapter though, I'm actually enjoying this story ^_^
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Post by Veg on Apr 15, 2006 22:48:52 GMT -5
I got the thing between woodlanders and vermin from the Redwall books. It's so unfair how those woodlanders treat those vermin.
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