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Post by Veg on Feb 28, 2006 18:27:48 GMT -5
Okay, here is a stupid fanfic I did, and I know you guys are gonna think it's stupid, but I decided to try it out anyway.
CHAPTER 1
Randall Boggs awoke to a sudden great pain through his whole body. A female lion was standing over him. “So you are awake.” She said in a calm voice. Randall shrugged. “I guess so.” “Follow me,” the lioness said, turning away and started to walk. Randall got up and walked after her. How did he came here? The last thing he remembered was being beaten up by this mad old lady. The lioness led him out into a street and down the road. Randall looked around. This was a strange neighborhood. The buildings were tall and dark, and also the cars were gray. The lioness then turned around and handed him a piece of paper. “You will be living in building 9, floor 22, room B3.” “Huh?” Randall stared at her. “That building over there,” She said, pointing. The tallest of the buildings stood near the block. Randall stared at it. “But wait! How do I know that is the right one? Are you trying to fool me?” But the lioness was gone. Randall threw his hands in the air and groaned. He went to the building and went in, up the elevator until he was in front of door B3. He gulped. “Well, here it goes.” He put his hand on the knob and slowly turned it.
*runs to a cave and hides*
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Post by RandallBoggs on Feb 28, 2006 18:34:43 GMT -5
Interesting...
"Hey wait a sec that sounds allot lik"
SSHH!! ^_^
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Post by Veg on Feb 28, 2006 18:44:24 GMT -5
All right, here is the chapter where it goes downhill.
CHAPTER 2
Randall poked his head in the room. Six weasels, a Mantavor, and two foxes looked up. “Uh...hi.” Randall said. “My name is Randall and I’m—” “You woke up in some strange building, Queen Sarabi led you to this apartment and now you’re gonna live here.” said one weasel with a green zoot suit. “Big deal. Same old story!” A female fox went over to Randall. “Don’t listen to Greasy. He gets a little grumpy now and then. My name is Sela.” She nodded at two young foxes. “Those are two of my sons, Chickenhound and Ferncloud.” Chickenhound and Ferncloud waved. Randall looked around in his new home. It was like a normal apartment building, except bigger. There was a kitchen on one corner and in the other corner was a hallway leading to the bedrooms. “Do you want to settle down in your room?” Sela asked. Randall shrugged. “Come on then.” She led him down the hall where the bedrooms were. There were 12 bedrooms in all. Six on one side, six on the other. A bat was hanging on a doorway, asleep. He blinked and yawned. Randall stared at horror at the bat’s legs. He had one normal leg...and a peg-leg. The bat blinked. “Oh look. A new face.” “Just ignore Fidget.” Sela whispered. “He’s had a rough life.” Randall stared at Fidget’s legs. Fidget glared at him. “My boss cut off my leg because I failed him!” He snapped. “So get used to it!” Sela led him away. “Do not stare at his peg leg.” She whispered. “He’s a little touchy about that.” Randall shuddered. Sela opened a door. “Now, there is your bed, so you can put your things away. I’ll leave you alone.” She closed the door. Randall looked around. Two beds were on each side of the room. He went to the empty bed and sat on it. He looked out the window and stared. A huge castle stood on a hill. It wasn’t dull or boring. It looked beautiful and friendly. Randall went to the window and stared at it. He felt something land on his back. He leaped up, trying to get the thing off him. He heard a voice hiss, "You're mine! Time for death!"
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Post by RandallBoggs on Mar 1, 2006 15:55:18 GMT -5
Good cliffhanging ^_^
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Post by Veg on Mar 2, 2006 20:31:59 GMT -5
Okay, the reviews are good so far. Lets keep it good. Here is the next chapter.
CHAPTER 3
Randall leaped up again, trying to get the thing off him. Suddenly, an idea floated in his mind. He fell back on the bed, trying to squash his intruder. He heard a loud, “OOMPH!” The thing let go. Randall spun around to look at his attacker. A small plant lifted it’s pod-like head. “Surprise is the greatest weapon of a Disney warrior.” It said. Randall stared at him. So this was the little terror that attacked him? “I’m Audrey 2 by the way.” The plant said, nibbling gently on his leaves. Randall stared at him still. Audrey 2 smiled. “I guess you never seen a man-eating plant before.” “No.” Randall said, shaking his head. “It’s just uh...how did you get here?” Audrey 2 grinned. “I came from the planet Neptune. I was sent to earth and lived in a flower shop for a few days. Then I got bigger and demanded more food. Pretty soon, I almost ate the hero’s girlfriend and so he destroyed me and I found myself here.” Randall stared at him. “Does that mean you are...uh...” “Dead?” Audrey 2 grinned. “I guess people think that, but I didn’t really die. Like I told you, I just found myself here and Queen Sarabi came to lead me here in this apartment.” Randall nodded. “You said something about Disney Warriors.” Audrey 2 nodded over to the castle. “See there? In the Disney kingdom, some characters travel there so they can become warriors.” He sighed and shuddered with delight. “It’s always been my dream to become one of the warriors! I sometimes imagine I’m one of them, fighting all those Disney villains!” “What are you talking about?” Randall asked. Audrey 2 looked at him. “Oh yeah. You’re new here. The Disney warriors are a bunch of Disney heros who fight off any evil that threatens to overcome the Disney kingdom. The Disney Kingdom is where some of the warriors live, but as humans like to call it...Disneyland.” Suddenly, a weasel’s head poked into the room. “Dinnertime!” He snapped. “Come on. To the kitchen!” “Who is that?” Randall asked Audrey 2 after the weasel left. “Fleabane.” Audrey 2 said. “Don't go in his bad side, he gets pretty grumpy.” “Why is everyone grumpy around here?” Randall asked. Audrey 2 shrugged. “They couldn’t accept the fact that they’re stuck here. Everyone around here usually begin in movies or TV shows and when they’re not needed anymore, they find themselves here. But sometimes some characters leave for a few years when the movie-makers need them for another sequel of the movie they were in. Watto was gone for about two years before he came back from working on a Star Wars Sequel. Maybe you’ll be in a sequel too.” Randall frowned. “I hope so.” Audrey 2 nodded. “I hope so too. But right now, I’m hungry. Lets eat!”
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Post by nauticusvergil on Mar 2, 2006 20:36:51 GMT -5
Alright, we got a little more background, looks good, keep it up. ^_^
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Post by RandallBoggs on Mar 2, 2006 20:39:03 GMT -5
Good background Veg ^_^ You wouldn't be happening to bring in Randall's sword from Roger are ya? ^_^
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Post by Veg on Mar 2, 2006 20:45:50 GMT -5
Maybe, maybe not.
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Post by RandallBoggs on Mar 2, 2006 20:48:41 GMT -5
^_-
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Post by fairlyoddnewyorker on Mar 2, 2006 20:51:46 GMT -5
This story ish cool. I'm liking this ^__^
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Post by Veg on Mar 2, 2006 21:01:50 GMT -5
Scroop's gonna be in it too, and also someone else from Scroop's past! ;D
Sebulba will be in this fic too!
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Post by Veg on Mar 4, 2006 23:27:58 GMT -5
Okay, here is the next chapter. Please send polite reviews!
CHAPTER 4
After dinner, Audrey 2 led Randall into the living room. “After dinner, we gather in little groups and share the news of the day.” “News of what?” Randall said. “I don’t even know what’s going on around here!” “Don’t worry.” Audrey 2 said. “You can just listen.” In the living room, everyone had gathered in small little groups and talking. Randall and Audrey 2 joined in with Sebulba, Watto and Scroop. “More warriors are needed for the Disney Kingdom.” The Dug named Sebulba said. “The evil ones are growing more and more, but almost all the Disney hero’s are off on their missions.” “Not to mention that Brer Rabbit is missing, even though he is not a warrior.” Scroop said. “Its been two months now, but he is still missing. Mrs. Rabbit and her children are getting worried.” The Toydarian, Watto snorted. “You think she is the only one who is desperate for Brer Rabbit? Why just the other week, I saw Brer Fox searching around with a knife and fork.” “Brer Rabbit has always been getting into trouble.” Sebulba said. “I say he can find his way out of it.” “Not if he bumped into evil ones.” Scroop said. “Who’s Brer Rabbit and Brer Fox?” Randall asked. They looked at him. “They are a few characters from Song of the South.” Sebulba said. “It came out in 1947.” Randall nodded. “I think Brer Rabbit’s disappearance is caused by Chernabog.” Audrey 2 piped up. “I mean, he is the leader of the evil ones.” “Yes,” Scroop nodded. “He is evil. Even the worst of the evil ones follows him.” Randall’s fronds pricked up when he kept on hearing these things about the evil ones. “I bet we can beat the evil ones if we were warriors!” Audrey 2 said. Sebulba scoffed. “Don’t be ignorant, Audrey. None of the hero’s would want to make us warriors.” “Why?” “Because, they say we are evil.” “Why?” “Because we did a few terrible things.” “Why?” Sebulba closed his eyes. “Oh Phlox. Because, we were a little foolish.” Audrey 2 grumbled. “Oh well that’s dumb. I just wanted a little food, that’s all.” He then brightened up. “Plus world domination!” The three aliens stared at him and sighed. “What’s Phlox?” Randall asked. “It’s just an expression we use.” Audrey 2 said. “It’s not a really good thing to say, actually.” “Then why say it?” Audrey 2 shrugged. “We’ve been saying for a long time, so I guess why break it?” “What other words do we use?” Randall asked. Audrey 2 thought for a moment. “Well, there is plink, catdrops, and Sebulba likes the words, poodoo.” “Poodoo?” Randall stared at him. “It’s a Dug word for Bantha dung.” Audrey 2 said. “I don’t know what a Bantha is either so don’t ask.” After a little while, one by one, the animals went off to bed. Audrey 2 yawned. “Boy, I’m tired! I think I should go to bed now.” “Same here.” Randall said.
In his bed, Randall stared at the ceiling. He wondered what it was like to be a Disney warrior. Pretty amazing, he bet. Randall closed his eyes and imagined he and Audrey 2, fighting side by side as Disney warriors.
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Post by RandallBoggs on Mar 5, 2006 14:55:21 GMT -5
Interesting. Who's Chernabog.
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Post by Veg on Mar 6, 2006 12:00:35 GMT -5
He's the big huge creepy devil in the Fantasia movie.
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Post by RandallBoggs on Mar 6, 2006 12:21:58 GMT -5
Ah. Fought him before.
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