Veg
Randall's Friend (800-1999)
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Post by Veg on Mar 12, 2006 2:11:26 GMT -5
Should I wait for the others to reply their thoughts, or post a few more chapters?
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Post by nauticusvergil on Mar 12, 2006 2:12:59 GMT -5
Hah! Let's call it quits for the night, this Disney Warrior needs to turn in. ^_^. Plus it'll give em some time to catch up, they're gonna be behind as it is. lol
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Veg
Randall's Friend (800-1999)
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Post by Veg on Mar 12, 2006 2:16:33 GMT -5
Okay, I'll take a break and try to restrain myself from posting another chapter.
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Post by nauticusvergil on Mar 12, 2006 2:17:24 GMT -5
Hah! I know how you feel! Night Veg! ^_^
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Post by RandallBoggs on Mar 12, 2006 13:23:41 GMT -5
Holy crap... You've been busy Veg... Sorry for not replying... Had...ermmm...business to attend to.
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Veg
Randall's Friend (800-1999)
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Post by Veg on Mar 13, 2006 16:07:37 GMT -5
Oh it's all right Sean! So how do you like it so far? And Randall, what's your opinion?
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Post by RandallBoggs on Mar 14, 2006 15:28:44 GMT -5
We'll read it soon ^_^ Let me get to the posts and wake Ran up.
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Post by RandallBoggs on Mar 14, 2006 16:43:43 GMT -5
Interesting so far...
"I would NOT have run away....but then again I WOULD do a trick like that with the pots...nice touch actually..."
I'm a bit confused at what's going on though...
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Veg
Randall's Friend (800-1999)
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Post by Veg on Mar 15, 2006 18:05:37 GMT -5
Um, they were made into defenders, which are not warriors yet, and now there is this thing that Madame Leota said about, um...oh crap, I forgot. I'll go check.
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Veg
Randall's Friend (800-1999)
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Post by Veg on Mar 15, 2006 18:06:55 GMT -5
Oh yeah, here is what she said.
“Evil and hate will try to rule, Send, they will, a helpless fool. But love and friendship will stand in the way, and revenge will come on that day.”
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Post by RandallBoggs on Mar 15, 2006 18:10:41 GMT -5
O...k...
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Veg
Randall's Friend (800-1999)
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Post by Veg on Mar 15, 2006 18:23:15 GMT -5
Eh...let me just post one chapter.
CHAPTER 13
That night, they rested near the river. Watto stood on a rock. “No sign of the evil ones yet. Maybe I should fly higher.” “Don’t.” Scroop said. “You will be easy prey.” Watto sniffed. “Puh! There are no evil ones here. You’ll see.” He flew up into the sky. “See?” He called down. “Nothing—” A blast of green shot out, striking his wing. Watto screamed with pain. Then to Randall’s horror, he fell into the river. “WATTO!” He and Audrey 2 screamed. Scroop jumped up. “Watto!” Watto’s head poked out from the water. He coughed and gasped as the water carried him away. The three defenders raced after Watto. “Toydarian’s can’t swim in water!” Audrey 2 cried. “He’ll drown if we don’t get him!” Suddenly, something that was light blue splashed into the water. Randall froze and watched as a female Toydarian swam toward Watto. She grabbed Watto’s arms and dragged him ashore to the three defenders. “It looks like he belongs to you.” She said with a calm, beautiful voice. Watto began to cough up water and looked up. He was stunned by the female’s beauty. The female frowned at Watto. “What the heck were you doing in the river?” Watto shrugged. “Drowning?” The female gave a sniff of amusement. “Who are you?” Scroop asked. The female spread her wings to dry them. “My name is Maria.” “That was incredible!” Audrey 2 said. “The way you dived in and rescued Watto. I thought Toydarian’s couldn’t swim!” “I was born and raised near a river.” Maria said. “I did a lot of swimming in my past.” “Hey guys!” Spike, Psycho, Rotnose and Cluny came racing in. “We saw what happened!” Cluny said. Psycho looked at Maria. “I guess we should thank you on saving one of our fellow temporary warriors.” “Thank nothing of it.” Maria said, shrugging. “I usually don’t help males.” “Why not?” Cluny asked. Maria shrugged. “Some of them are jerks. They think ‘No’ means ‘Yes’ and ‘Get lost’ means ‘Take me, I’m yours’.” Maria looked at Watto who looked away. “So I hear you are warriors.” Maria said. “Only defenders.” Rotnose corrected. “The other warriors keep on disappearing.” Maria nodded. “I bet they do.” She looked toward Splash Mountain. “If you need any help, Splash Mountain is the perfect place to search.” Scroop nodded. “We’ll check there. Thank you.” Maria shrugged and flew off. Watto kept on staring at her as she left. “Are you all right?” Randall asked. Watto nodded dumbly.
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Post by RandallBoggs on Mar 15, 2006 18:24:49 GMT -5
Whoa she comes out of nowhere.
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Post by nauticusvergil on Mar 15, 2006 18:25:55 GMT -5
Very nice, Watto's been lovestruck ^_^
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Randall's Friend (800-1999)
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Post by Veg on Mar 15, 2006 18:43:22 GMT -5
Okay, here is another chapter. Sean, I'm sorry if I get the whole Heartless thing wrong, because I've never played Kingdom of Hearts before, so I don't know what Heartless do when they are killed.
CHAPTER 14
They walked toward Splash Mountain. “We’re almost there. Come on.” Spike said. “Lets go.” He then stopped. He turned back. “No we’re not, there are Heartless out there!” Randall took a look. Black little humanoid things stood near Splash Mountain. “What are those?” “The Heartless.” Audrey 2 said. “They are the warriors of the Evil Kingdom. It is rumored that they can get into you and make the darkness in your heart take control over you.” He looked at Randall. “That is what happened to all of us, before we came here.” He whispered. “They affected the weasels, the hyenas, Scroop, Sebulba, me, you, everyone that we live with!” Randall paused. He remembered that feeling he had when he was chasing Sulley and Mike through the door vault. A feeling of hatred, anger and...evil. Was that how the Heartless took over you? “What do we do?” Psycho asked. “Distract them?” Audrey 2 suggested. Randall looked up at the dead tree near the evil warriors. He took a deep breath and blended in. “Randall?!” Audrey 2 said. Randall ignored him and went toward the tree. He climbed it up and hung near the branch. A few hefty chops and the branch will fall on top of them. Randall drew out his sword and gave the dead branch some good hefty chops. The branch fell on top of the Heartless. The Heartless screamed and suddenly disappeared. The animals raced in. “Nice job!” Audrey 2 said. “You killed the Heartless!” Cluny stretched. “I need to sit down for a moment.” He sat on a rock and jumped up when the rock went, “YEEEEOOOOWWWW!!!!” “What was that?!” Spike said. Scroop shrugged. “Maybe just a cat.” Cluny sat down on the rock. “YEEEEOOOOWWWW!!!!” Cluny jumped. “Cat my back paw! That came from the rock!” Everyone stared at the rock. “Maybe it’s under a spell.” Psycho suggested. “What kind of spell?” Watto asked. Audrey 2 thought for a moment. “In the Disney movies, a kiss always break the spell.” He looked around. “So who’s gonna kiss the rock?” There was silence. “What about Spike?” Randall suggested. Spike stared at him. “Me?! Why me? Why not you?” Randall smiled and shrugged. “Almost everyone around here have fur. I just have scales. Besides, you look as close as a handsome prince.” Psycho nudged Spike. “Why not give it a try, Boss?” Spike frowned. He went down to his paws and tried to determine where the lips used to be. He puckered up and pressed his lips on the rock. Nothing happened. “Phooey!” Spike spat. Everyone laughed. “Maybe you gotta keep on trying until you find out where the lips are.” Audrey 2 said. He then paused. “I wonder what part did you kissed.” Spike made a face and wiped his lips. Cluny frowned. “I’ll go get some water to drink.” He walked away. Randall went over to Watto. “You never really talked much Watto.” He said. Watto looked at him. “Sorry, I was just thinking.” “Is it about Maria?” “No.” Watto said, staring at him with wide eyes. “Don’t lie.” Randall said. Watto sighed. “All right, I admit. I am thinking about Maria. She is just so...” He paused. “Pretty?” Randall said. “Beautiful.” Watto said softly. Cluny came back with a jug of water. “Nothing like fresh water from the stream, eh?” He walked toward to a tree, but then slipped, spilling water over the rock. There was a bright light and a rabbit stood there, twitching his nose. He raced over to Cluny and hugged his leg. “Oh thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!!! I thought I was gonna be like that fer ever!” “It’s Brer Rabbit!” Audrey 2 said. “What happened to you?” Scroop asked. “Mrs. Rabbit and your children are worried!” Brer Rabbit thought for a moment. “Well, I was jus’ o’er there, spyin’ on the evil ones. I wasn’t spyin’ really. Jus’ taken’ a look. Well, Chernabog caught me and turned me into a rock.” Psycho sniffed with anger. “How cruel!” “Ye tellin’ me!” Brer Rabbit said. “I was like that for two months and always hopin’ someone would pour water o’er me.” He then stared at Spike. “You kissed me on my little cotton ball tail!” Spike stared at him, and wiped his mouth again. Brer Rabbit stared at Randall. “I haven’t seen ya’ before. Where ya’ come from?” “Monstropolis.” Randall said. Brer Rabbit richarded his head to one side. “Never heard of that place.” Psycho yawned. “Boy am I tired! Maybe we should get some sleep.” “Good idea.” Rotnose said, yawning. “I could use a little shut eye.” The animals curled up and said good-night to each other. Brer Rabbit snuggled up next to Cluny’s side. Randall looked at Scroop for a long time. Why did Scroop snapped at him when he asked about his past. Did something happened to him? Questions filled Randall’s head as he fell asleep. He found himself standing in a dark place. A female Mantavor watched with pride as an egg cracked open and out came a small Mantavor baby. The mother nuzzled her baby and smiled. Then, right before Randall’s eyes, the mother disappeared, leaving the baby, crying with fright and cold. Randall awoke with a start. He looked around. The sky was turning pale dark, almost dawn. He looked at the others. Spike was spread out on the ground, mumbling in his sleep. Psycho was laying on his back with his back legs and arms straight up into the air. Cluny was flicking his tail in his sleep while Brer Rabbit snored gently next to him. Rotnose’s paws were moving a little and he whimpered a little bit in his dreams. Scroop’s body raised every time he breathed. Audrey 2 had his head under his leaves. Randall rolled on his back. What did his dream meant? He looked around one more time and noticed something shocking. Watto was gone.
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