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Post by lizardgirl on Jul 10, 2007 17:08:14 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Jul 10, 2007 18:49:10 GMT -5
I normally don't review these things anymore for very good reasons......but in this case I'll make an exception. You certainly conveyed the mood effectively here quite well. I was actually multi-tasking WHILE reading it, and the fact that I felt the urgency in the chapter come through should say something I think as my attention wasn't even fully on it, but this was well done to say the least. Nice job so far LGBB ^_^
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Post by lizardgirl on Jul 11, 2007 7:38:33 GMT -5
Thanks. ;D The next chapter is up now, but it'll probably be a while before I continue.
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