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Post by TheOnePistol on Sept 10, 2010 23:32:16 GMT -5
I'v dicided to do my first FanFic! yay ;D
This Story takes place two years after the first Monsters Inc film.
This is just the first chapter, there will be more, please tell me what you think as I keep going.
Also half of this story is based off of Sharkluvr's art on Deviant Art, and RateMyDrawings.
Chapter 1: The Birthday Surprise
It was a beautiful day in Monstropolis, ever since the discovery of laugh energy, the city has had more power then they could deal with.
Monsters Inc was rated #1 energy plant in the Monster Realm. James P Sullivan has gotten rewarded twice for all the his success and hard work he has put into the company.
“Shhh everyone here he comes”, a voice quietly said. Sully was just getting home from work, ever since he became CEO he has had a lot more to deal with then he did when he was a scarer. But it paid off, with all the extra money him and Mike were getting, they were able to buy bigger apartment, one with three bedrooms so Celia can move in with Mike. She wasn’t ready to be sleeping in the same bed as him though. Sully walked through the front door and went into the living room when suddenly.
“SURPRISE!!!” Thirty different voices screamed at the same time.
Sully screamed and fell backwards over his chair.
“Sul, are you ok?” Mike said as he rushed over to help his friend up.
“Mike?, what’s all this?”
“Its your surprise party!”
“Party? For what?”
“You don’t remember? Its your Birthday you big fur ball!” Mike shouted with joy.
“Oh yeah” Sully said.
“Hi Sully!” Ranft said dancing to the music that was playing.
George was over in the corner blindfolded swinging at a piñata that was behind him, everyone else was just trying to avoid his swings.
“Happy Birthday Mr. Sullivan” Smitty and Needleman both said at the same time”
“Thanks guys, but seriously how many times to I gotta tell you, call me Sully.” Sully said with a smirk.
“You know you can call me Mr.Wazowski if that makes you feel better.” Mike said.
“Yeah that’s not gona happen, anyway here’s your surpri- I MEAN PRESENT Mr Sullivan!” Smitty held up a small wrapped box.
“Thanks gu- wait a minute, is there another surprise for me?”
Needleman slapped Smitty on the back of the head.
“You idiot! Now he knows!”
“Ow! Sorry!”
“Oh what is it?!” Sully asked.
“Follow me Sul.” Mike said
Mike began to walk down the hall, and Sully followed closely behind.
“We’ll wait out here.” Needleman said.
Sully followed Mike into his bedroom and Mike shut the door behind them.
“Ok Mike come on seriously wha-”
“Kitty!”
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Post by TheOnePistol on Sept 11, 2010 0:32:02 GMT -5
Chapter 2: Staying Late
“BOO!”
“Happy Birthday Kitty!” Boo said as she held up a card.
Sully took the card and opened it, inside was a drawing of appeared to be him and Boo holding hands. Sully smiled as he glanced it over.
“Aw, thanks Boo” Sully said.
He picked her up and gave her a big bear hug, they both laughed, Mike just watch with a warm smile on his face.
“Whoa, wait a minute! What if someone see’s her?” Sully asked.
“Oh don’t worry, I got Smitty and Needleman guarding the door.
Smitty and Needleman were both standing in front of the door, with very bored looks on their faces.
“How long do we half to stand here?”
“Hey have you two seen Sully?” George asked
“Uh, Nope, nooo he certainly isn’t behind this door if that what your wondering!” They both smiled. George looked at them confused.
“Um…..OK” George walked away.
About an hour went by and Mike, Sully, Boo were playing board games.
“Sigh, ok Boo, I think its time we get u back home, where’s your costume? Sully asked
“Um…. I thought Mikey had it.” Boo said.
“Uh Oh, I knew I forgot something.” Mike said with a half grin on his face.
“WHAT!, Mike how are we supposed to get her out of here without everyone in the next room seeing her?
“Don’t worry, Don’t worry, I got this.” Mike said as he cracked the bedroom door open.
“Needleman, I need you two to create a distraction.”
“Why?” Smitty asked
“Sully forgot the costume” Mike said. Sully looked up.
“Wha-”
“ANYWHAY! Just do it will ya” Mike said.
“Sigh, alright fine!” Needleman said as he ran off dragging Smitty with him.
“CAN I HAVE YOUR ATTENTION PLEASE” Needleman shouted.
Everyone starred at Needleman and Smitty.
“Um……” Then some fast music started to play and Needleman started to dance.
“What are you doing” Smitty asked
Needleman slapped Smitty in the back of the head.
“OW”
“Shut up and dance” Smitty started to dance, then he slapped Needleman in the back of the head, then Needleman slapped him back, now they were dancing and smacking each other in the head.
It seemed to do the trick, Sully and Mike were able to sneak past the crowd with Boo.
They all got in the car.
“Ok lets get to the factory.” Sully said
After a short drive they arrived at the factory and got Boo’s door and put her in it.
“Bye Boo, and thanks again for the card.” Sully said as he gave her another hug.
“Bye Kitty, bye Mikey” Boo said waving bye.
“See Ya kiddo” Mike said back.
They shut the door and turned it off.
“Sigh, well im heading back, the party should be over by now, you coming?” Mike asked
“No since im here I might as well clean up my office, iv been putting that off too much, ill just walk home when im done.”
“Yawn, well alright, im going to bed when I get home, so ill see you tomorrow I guess.” Mike said
“Ok by Mike”
Mike walked out. Sully went to his office, it was a mess, papers every were, file cabinet unorganized, and trash all around the waste basket.
Sully began with picking up the trash and then collected the papers. Once that was done he started organizing the filing cabinet. He was shuffling through the old scare files when he came across one that caught his interest.
“Hmm, I wonder how Randall’s doing.”
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Post by mistica0christina on Sept 11, 2010 0:59:14 GMT -5
*claps hands* Very nice intro, the time lapse is actually pretty good as well. You have in my opinion a pretty good start to this and also, I do feel you got it right with Boo since now she would be about four. I have a four year old brother so I do have a good idea how they're like at that age too. Can't wait to see more. ;D
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Post by TheOnePistol on Sept 11, 2010 1:33:50 GMT -5
*claps hands* Very nice intro, the time lapse is actually pretty good as well. You have in my opinion a pretty good start to this and also, I do feel you got it right with Boo since now she would be about four. I have a four year old brother so I do have a good idea how they're like at that age too. Can't wait to see more. ;D Thank you, I'm very glad to hear you like it so far, i was a little nervous with this being my first FanFic and all. Ill write the next chapter in the morning, im to tired to think right now. lol i have alot of ideas for this story, so as long as i don't get bored with it, which i probably wont, this will be a pretty long FanFic, lol thank you again
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Post by TheOnePistol on Sept 11, 2010 2:40:04 GMT -5
Chapter 3: The Swamp Thing
It was wet and gloomy in the Louisiana swamp, it was about mid-day, this swamp was home to a very familiar monster. Near the heart of the swamp Randall Boggs was in a small pond holding a sharp stick, which he is using to try and catch nice juicy fish.
“The way I see it, fishing is all about timing and patients” Randall said to the alligator that was lying at the edge of the pond.
“Hsssss”
“Yeah, tell me about it.” Randall said as he spotted a big one, he readied himself, and waited a few seconds, and lunged the stick forward.
“CRAP! These things are impossible to catch!”
“Hsssss”
“Well excuse me, I don’t see you in here trying to catch one of the little slippery demons!”
“Agh, THIS IS POINTLESS!” Randall threw the stick in the water and folded his arms.
Randall looked down at his reflection, Randall had a huge scar that ran from the top of his right eye down to his chin, it reminds him everyday how he got there. Randall growled.
“I swear on my life, you will pay for this Sullivan, you and that stupid eyeball friend of yours” Randall said venomously.
“Hsssss”
“Oh ha ha, very funny Gator” Randall said as he began heading back through the swamp, followed by Gator.
He arrived at a small cave, and went inside. Inside the cave was an old mattress with a pillow and some blankets, next to it was a wireless radio (gotta have some entertainment), and on the other side of the cave was a small pad with some blankets also, that’s were Gator sleeps. Randall’s stomach started growling.
“Sigh, well it looks like were having left over possum again.” Randall said.
“Hsssss”
“Yeah, you’ll eat anything wont ya?”
The sun was going down, Randall started a camp fire outside his cave and cooked the half a possum and shared it with his alligator friend.
“You know, once you get past the bad tasting food, its really not that bad here. Its nice to get up to peace and quiet, no traffic, no loud city noises, no work, rent, or bills, if there IS one thing I enjoyed most out of all this, it’s the fact that its an adventure everyday, to get up and go hunting, then lay out under the stars at night. If I do spend the rest of my life here, I guess it wouldn't be so bad.”
“Hsssss”
“Well what do you know, you’ve lived here your whole life!”
After Randall was done eating, he did a few stretches, crawled into bed and went sleep, so did his alligator friend.
“Hsssss”
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Post by Leopardstream on Sept 11, 2010 16:50:30 GMT -5
That's wonderful! Can't read to read more of it TheOnePistol!
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Post by sgtyayap on Sept 11, 2010 16:55:11 GMT -5
Great story so far! ;D I love how Ran has a gator buddy! ;D
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Post by TheOnePistol on Sept 11, 2010 18:55:47 GMT -5
thank you ;D
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Post by TheOnePistol on Sept 11, 2010 19:15:49 GMT -5
Chapter 4: Newsflash
It was 5:30am when everyone’s alarm clock went off. Then they began their everyday morning routine.
Celia was feeding her….hair, Sully was brushing his teeth, and Mike fell asleep on the table wile eating a bowl of Monster O’s.
“Googelybear!”
“Agh, I didn’t do it!” Mike jump out of his seat
“Mike I told you shouldn’t have stayed up so late last night.
“What was that!“ Sully said running into the room.
“Uh….Celia fell asleep” Mike pointed to Celia.
“Right, It was me” Celia said with a smirk.
Mike sat down on the couch and was flipping through the channels.
“ So, you feed your hair?” Sully asked
“Yep” Celia replied
“But, were dose it-”
“WHOA!” Mike shouted.
“WHAT!” Sully shouted back.
“You guys get over here and look at this.”
They went over to the TV which had Monstropolis morning news on it which said,
“We have just received and urgent message that former inmate Henry Waternoose, has escaped from Monstropolis prison.”
A picture of Waternoose appeared on the screen, Sully dropped his coffee.
“If u see this monster, do not confront him, he is extremely dangerous, contact the authorities immediately.” Mike looked at Sully.
“Uh oh, that’s not good Sul, not good at all” Mike said.
“Yeah” agreed Celia
Sully just stood there, “Well maybe its nothing to worried about.”
“Are you kidding, Sul he wouldn’t escape from prison for no reason, he obviously wants to get us for having him put there in the first place.” Mike said rising his arms above his head.
“Yeah well, lets just get to work and we’ll worry about it later” Sully said nervously.
They both agreed and finished what they were doing and headed to work.
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Post by TheOnePistol on Sept 11, 2010 19:45:26 GMT -5
Chapter 5: The Hunter and the Hunted BANG! A lout gunshot was heard, Randall’s eyes flew wide open, he quickly jumped out of bed and peeked out side of his cave. BANG! Another shot was heard. Randall quickly ran back in and threw a blanket over Gator, camouflaged himself and went to were the noise was coming from. He didn’t run far when he hid behind a tree and notice a group of three humans, all of which were carrying rifles. “Hunters!, What are they doing here, its not even Saturday yet.” Randall whispered to himself. “I’m gona catch me that there swamp monster and hang his head on my wall, That varmint let loose one of my gators.” one of the hunters said. They were all wearing what appeared to be Heat Seeking Goggles. “Oh great, these idiots came prepared this time” Randall whispered. “There he is!” one of the hunters shouted. Bang! Randall quickly evaded to the right, but the bullet scalped the side of his top left arm. “Agh!” Randall clenched his hand around the wound, and started running. Sully was sitting in his office in deep thought. “Hey Sul, you ok? Mike came in and asked. “I was looking through some of the old scare files, and I came across Randall’s, you don’t suppose he has anything to do with Waternoose’s escape do you?” Sully asked. “I doubt it, Randall’s in the human world.” “Do you think he’s alright?” Sully asked “Why should we care?” Mike asked “Well, we’re responsible for whatever happens to him, remember we are the ones who banished him.” Mike looked at Sully with a serious face, “Well if there’s one thing good I can say about him, its that he’s got skills, I’m sure he can take care of himself.” “Yeah your probably right, well I gotta get back to work, and so do you, so ill talk to ya later, ok buddy?” “Yeah, see ya Sul” Mike said and then turned around and left the room. Sully got back to work on his paperwork. Randall was running as fast as he could through the swamp, the Hunters closely behind him. Randall ran through a small trailer park and hid behind one of the trailers. Randall looked at the scrape on his arm, which was bleeding pretty badly. “I think he went this way” Randall heard one the hunters say. They were getting closer, soon they would have him. Randall didn’t know what to do. Then he looked up and realized there was a window above his head, he quickly opened in and climbed through it, and shut it behind him. Randall was peaking out the window, as he watched the hunters run past the trailer. Randall sighed with relief. “Randall!?” a voice said. Randall quickly turned around and noticed he was in a kids bedroom, and the kid was awake with a monster standing at the foot of his bed. “Fungus!?” WHOA talk about a cliffhanger I'm gonna take a small break, while i think of whats gonna happen in the next chapter. So what do you guys think so far?
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Post by mistica0christina on Sept 11, 2010 20:23:47 GMT -5
Should have commented after reading chapter 3 but guess now is better than nothing. I love the irony of chapter 3 with Randall befriending a gator even though it makes me wonder how the two first met. The bit with Celia's hair...well, that's going to leave me wondering about that now but still, a good joke to add in as well. Then the cliffhanger, nicely written, makes me wonder of what's going to happen next, I like what you have so far.
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Post by TheOnePistol on Sept 11, 2010 20:27:20 GMT -5
Should have commented after reading chapter 3 but guess now is better than nothing. I love the irony of chapter 3 with Randall befriending a gator even though it makes me wonder how the two first met. The bit with Celia's hair...well, that's going to leave me wondering about that now but still, a good joke to add in as well. Then the cliffhanger, nicely written, makes me wonder of what's going to happen next, I like what you have so far. thank you and if u look closely in Chapter 5 one of the hunters said that Randall let loose one of his gators. and thank you again, i'm glad you like it. ;D
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Post by mistica0christina on Sept 11, 2010 20:28:19 GMT -5
Lol, oh, that probably explains it then, and you're welcome. ;D
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Post by TheOnePistol on Sept 11, 2010 22:10:17 GMT -5
Chapter 6: The Return “Randall?!” “Fungus?!” “Randall!?” “Fung-” Randall stopped himself and folded his arms, he then noticed that Fungus was wearing face paint and had a pogo stick in his left had. “W-what are you d-doing here Randall?” Fungus asked. “Hiding from hunters, what…..are you doing?” Randall asked with a confused look on his face. “M-making this kid laugh.” “…..Why?” “Sooo I can collect his laughs.” Fungus said. “La- what happened to scream?!” Randall shouted. “W-well shortly after Waternoose was arrested and you disappeared, Mr. Sullivan discovered laugh energy is more powerful then scream, so he became the companies new CEO.” Randall just stood there with a shocked expression on his face, he didn’t know what to say, that was a lot of surprising information at once. Fungus noticed Randall’s bloody arm. “Randall, are you ok?” Fungus asked pointing at his arm. “…..Huh, yeah I’m fine! So Sullivan’s the new CEO?” Fungus nodded. “I cant believe this, I worked eighteen months straight on that stupid Scream Extractor in hopes of getting that position, and I get banished and he gets it with out even doing anything!” “Wait, you were banished!?” Fungus asked. “….No, I’m here in the Human World because I’m on vacation! YES, that stupid fur rug and his eyeball friend banished me!” Fungus was shocked. “You'v been gone for two years, they told us that once Waternoose was arrested you fled the city. Why would they lie to us?” “Because what they did was illegal, and their gonna pay for it!” Randall snapped. Randall went to the closet door and cracked it open and peaked inside, the scream, well laugh floor was full of balloons and every monster was juggling something. “This is wrong in every way” Randall whispered to himself. “Fungus” Fungus looked up at Randall. “I was never here, understand?” Fungus nodded. Randall camouflaged himself and went through the door, he was back home. This was allot sooner then i planned But oh well, I'm done for today, I'll write more tomorrow.
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Post by mistica0christina on Sept 12, 2010 1:02:35 GMT -5
You did that chapter rather well, I also like how Randall is "I wasn't here." Nice to see that you did find a way to get him back to the Monster World, now next would be how he'll play into the events already unfolded.
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