Randall Vs the Dark Hunters

[Nidhiki]

ok.....this is my first story so it will be Cr*p...but i don't mind. Most characters don't belong to me....Randall and all monsters from monsters inc belong to Pixar and all but 2 dark hunters don't belong to me either

also....the first chapter will not be long.....just getting into the story........


Chapter 1

The hall was a dark and lifeless area,torches were lit at the far end...but they didn't let out much light,as the darkness could not be penetrated by light. in between the torches there was a huge throne....and sitting on it was a figure,but all that could be seen of it were two blood red eyes. the massive door opened and a strange monster appeared. it was mostly yellow with patches of black,and its head had no eyes. it had four arms, one carrying a large weapon it walled to over to the throne and bowed before it
"What is your bidding my lord"
"Weee have much work to doooo"
the yellow monster could see its master thinking
"Sentrack....i have come up with my master plan"
the figures hand became visible, it had six fingers,each was long and sharp pointed.
"i want you to find me some of our best men and prepare to send them out clear an area"
"my lord...were is this location"
Sentrack got to his feet and looked at his master
"MONSTROPOLIS"

yes..it is short....Randall will be introduced next chapter. ;D

[Nidhiki]

ok...as there is no reply ill take it that the story is Cr*p

[Malic]

We just didn't want to interrupt. I vote you continue.

[Nidhiki]

ok......errrrrr....

Chapter 2

"RANDALL!!!!!"
Randall's eyes shot open to see fungus
"What now" Randall groaned
"your 1 hour late for work"
fungus looked at Randall who just lay there
"well..i'm sorry then"
Fungus grabbed a lever and pushed it. at that moment Randall's bed flipped up flinging Randall across the room and into the room
"ok....i'm up"
It was just a normal day for Randall, he would scare kids and try and beat sully for the scare record. as he was late Randall didn't get his cup of coffe...so he was half asleep. at the end of the day Randall decided to get his cup of coffe.....and as he walked into the scare floor to get his belongings he saw a door. Randall decided to send it away. as he shut the door he herd some think on the other side. he steeped away. the door burst open as a monster came running out. the monster was twice the size of Randall, and more stronger. the monsters body was a dark blue color, his head was white and seemed to only have one eye
"fu*k" Randall said aloud
the monster turned to face him. Randall looked at his hands,the where huge. He jumped at Randall who dodged out of the way. Randall Made a Run for it. Randall looked back to see the monster bringing out a weapon. the weapon was mounted on his shoulder. the weapon fired a bolt of red energy at him Randall darted side to side dodging the blasts. Randall Ran into the corridors. suddenly another monster came through the roof. the blue monster came around the back,Randall was surrounded
"Nidhiki.....i told you I'll get him"
Nidhiki was mostly green. he had for legs and his hands where claws
"Krekka you fool....if i hadn't shown up he would of got away"
at that moment all three of them herd gunfire.....


Well...thats Chapter two done

Nidhiki

Krekka

[Nidhiki]

ok.....once again I'm back......obveusly the story isn't great....hardly any response but...i'm continuing any way

Chapter 3

the gunfire came out of nowhere. suddenly Nidhiki was hit by ton of bullets. turning around to see his opponent nidhiki stepped on a grenade
"******"
nidhiki went flying across the corridor and into a tray of canisters
"KREKKA, after him"
krekka jumped in the air firing blasts of energy at the opponent. Randall took the opportunity to run but got hit by Nidhiki's energy web. Randall was unable to move,Nidhiki loomed over him
"where do you think your going"
Krekka got a good look at the attacker, and surprised to see it was a human. the human wore a old green jacket,blue jeans and white tennis shoes. he seemed to carry allot of firearms, but Krekka was more then a match for him. the human lobed a smoke grenade at the monsters
"hey...where he go" Krekka shouted
the human grabbed Randall and ran to the exit. by the time the smoke cleared they where both gone
"you win this round human...but i swear i will track you down and DESTROY YOU" nidhiki shouted
"so...where they go"
nidhiki looked at Krekka
"i had to be partnered with you

Randall woke back up in his apartment. sitting up he noticed it was night. looking around he noticed the human sitting on his chair
"ok...who the fu*k are you"
"my name's Drake"
"right...and what where they" Randall asked
"they where Dark Hunters...an order of killers...
"O.K"
Randall noticed a bunch of guns in the corner of the room
"And there yours"
"yes....but they seem infective against them"Drake said "you should get some Rest..."
Randall turned to go to bed
"and oh...i'd watch your back, there after you"
"thats reassuring"
Randall fell asleep instantly. but he woke up to something else. his room was destroyed. he looked out at the city to see it ruined, building lay in ruins and fires burned and in the distance there was a tall tower
"What happened" Randall said
a voice then came from behind him
"this is what will happen...if you fail"

please comment

this is the tower randall see's in the distance

it is called the Dark hunter's tower fortress

a corridor in the tower


i can't be Bothered to describe every thing so i find pics to show you what it looks like

[Weasel Freak]

*looks around*... *does not see Delva*... *shrugs and reads again*

Very nice story.

[Nidhiki]

o.k....this chapter will be short...as I'm tired and i can't be Bothered

Chapter 4

"What do you mean FAIL" Randall asked
the figure came out of the darkness
"the dark hunters came here to invade, and if you don't stop them then this is what will happen"
Randall looked out across the town, every were there where foundries
"What are they doing" Randall asked. he was looking around,the sky was full of black smoke.
"this is where the dark hunters make the weapons of war"
"were is every one"
"they have been taken to there tower fortress" the figure pointed to the tower in the distance "the population are sent to slave camps to make the weapons, but some act as servants and jesters for the Shadowed One...but once he gets bored of them...he kills them"
"And What Happens to me" Randall said
"You die"
Randall Eyes shot wide open at those words
"the shadowed one killed you first, and hung your body on the wall along with your human friend"
"RANDALL"
Randall woke up, his eyes wide open he turned to see fungus standing there
"are you alright"
"I'm fine...It was just a dream"

ok....it was longer then i thought

the foundries Randall cold see

[Nidhiki]

Chapter 5

Randall had just woken up from one of the worst nightmares he ever had, a glimpse at the future. In side Monsters Inc, people were crowded over on spot. The CDA where everywhere.
“What’s Happened” Fungus Asked
Randall decided to move on and get to work. When he got to his new station, he noticed a new scarer. Her name was Delva Ranrutts.
*Note-I can’t be bothered to describe her so please go to I’m back..but not for long*
Randall noticed she had no assistant, and her canister loaded up automatically. Randall’s door was ready so he decided to camouflage. He ran into the room and closed the door, but before he could look where he was, he was grabbed and thrown onto the wall.
“Let me guess…a Dark Hunter”
The creature stepped out of the shadows. He was mostly Red with patches of silver armour. Underneath the right arm, there was a large sword, while the left hand was a three-fingered claw. Randall noticed the room was an abandoned building and in the corner, there was Drake who was also tied up
“Be quiet,” the creature said
“Who are you?” Randall Asked
“I am Vorporak”
Vorporak heard a noise from the other side of the door
“What’s going on in there?”
It was Delva. She burst in, then Vorporak grabbed her and tied her up as well
“No use struggling….your powers won’t work, as these energy binds disable all powers”
He stared at the three
“Well….what you know, two monsters and a human in one,oh my master will be pleased”
Placing the three on hover boards Vorporak headed out of the building, and Rising above the Ruined buildings the was the Dark Hunters tower
“You see that tower,” Vorporak said pointing at it “that will be your new home”
All three of them stared up, Randall Noticed it was the same Tower he saw in his nightmare. Randall then noticed…he had Failed.

Vorporak


ok...there story's near the climax...please comment

[Nidhiki]

Aug 19, 2008 17:00:28 GMT -5 Weasel Freak said:

*looks around*... *does not see Delva*... *shrugs and reads again*

Very nice story.

thanks..i'ts mostly improv

[RandallBoggs]

Would be good to say who the Dark Hunters are, since I'm guessing it's a crossover, to make readers a bit more familiar to them for your story ^_^
Interesting story so far though ^_^ Also like how your using visuals to represent bits in the chapters ^_^

[Nidhiki]

thanks ok...dark hunters are an order of killers...but i didn't make them...so i don't know much about them....apart from Krekka is stupid and the shadowed one is invincible.......but more of them will be revealed....

i have the pics to show people places and characters...as i can't be botherd to describe them

[Nidhiki]

ok....this isn't a chapter....this is about the dark hunters...so you now who they are

as mentioned before,The Dark Hunters are an organization of bounty hunters, thieves, and warriors. they are violent and always wage war. once you join the dark hunters you can never leave

The Shadowed one

he is the leader of the dark hunters,he very rarely goes out of his fortress. he was 100000000 years after he got caught on vorporak's aging sheild-yes..he is old. has many powers. has a staff that can mutate living things. can shoot dark energy out of his hand's

sorry..no pic

Voporak

brave warrior. vorpork has many weapons. he has an aging shield, and a claw. his sword Can shoot beams of energy at his enemies. he has one weakness. he was mutated as an experiment

vorpoorak in action



i'll tell you more about the others later

[Nidhiki]

o.k some more stuff on the dark hunters Nidhiki and krekka

Nidhiki

Nidhiki is another example of mutation. he tried to leave the dark hunters and got mutated. he has no hands, and he had the power of flight. he can fire energy webs out of his mouth, the web captures and renders the target immobile. out of the 2 Nidhiki is the smart one

Nidhiki firing energy web


Krekka
Krekka was banished from his home island after going mad. he destroyed half of his home. he is strong but stupid. he has 1 eye. he has a shoulder mounted weapon that can penetrate any amour

Krekka in action

please comment on anything about the story or dark hunters

[Weasel Freak]

*claps* Nice chapter. (Go Delva!! )

[Nidhiki]

delva will have her revenge on vorporak