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Post by pitbulllady on Mar 13, 2005 16:43:36 GMT -5
No prob...hey, I'm an honors English student, I know good writing when I see--err--read it! ;D Everyone here who's posted their work has made excellent stuff, actually. OMIGOSH. This is OT, but I found this i-kronos.com site for the Incredibles movie, & Pitbullady had one of her best pics I've ever seen submitted there!! It's Mirage & Buddy...omg...I love it! *dies* WHAT!? You mean you just NOW found it? My little "ganster" tirbute pic? It's on my DA gallery, too, by the way. Can't help it-I'm a hopeless Buddy/Mirage "shipper", LOL! Glad you like it, anyway. pitbulllady
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Post by Mirage on Mar 13, 2005 16:45:56 GMT -5
WHAT!? You mean you just NOW found it? My little "ganster" tirbute pic? It's on my DA gallery, too, by the way. Can't help it-I'm a hopeless Buddy/Mirage "shipper", LOL! Glad you like it, anyway. pitbulllady XD Yeah...actually...I just found that one today. Better late than never. O_e;; But yes, I adore it...one of the best ships in the world, it is, yup. *nods*
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Post by RandallBoggs on Mar 13, 2005 16:47:08 GMT -5
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Post by Mirage on Mar 13, 2005 16:48:59 GMT -5
Oh, sorry....we've steered your thread in a slightly different direction, haven't we? <:-}
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Post by RandallBoggs on Mar 13, 2005 16:55:19 GMT -5
Huh? Oh...uh...well...yeah....
But don't get me wrong. I'm glad you entered your work in Pitbulllady. Believe me your sure to win ^_^ Or if it isn't a contest, destined to be the best reviewed ^_^
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Post by Mirage on Mar 13, 2005 16:58:19 GMT -5
Eh, no contest. No reviews, even, it's just a gallery.
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Post by RandallBoggs on Mar 13, 2005 16:59:46 GMT -5
Double wronged.....^_^
Uh...then uhh....most....Viewed?
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Post by Mirage on Mar 13, 2005 17:02:16 GMT -5
;D Hopefully!! And btw pitbulllady, I was just going through your Deviantart gallery. I've seen most of it already--don't know how I could've missed that one. It's all so good, 'specially the Randall & Mirage one on the bike in Pirate's Alley, New Orleans....it's hot.
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Post by RandallBoggs on Mar 13, 2005 17:27:39 GMT -5
So.... Joy....Pitbulllady any comments?
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Post by pitbulllady on Mar 13, 2005 17:40:05 GMT -5
What can I say? It's wonderful, though I sorta had this picture in my mind of Randall going on the lam with the kid, and being forced to spend time alone with her, in some hide-away in the boonies only he knows about, before resolving to try to get her back to her world. The beginning was pure brilliance-having it start with a letter he'd written to Mary(Boo, for those who don't know that's her real name)years later, explaining everything when he would figure she would finally be old enough to understand.
pitbulllady
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Post by RandallBoggs on Mar 13, 2005 17:42:37 GMT -5
Pitbulllady.... It's NOT just a few chapters.
If anyone pays attention to the little bits....notice in the last chapter. "the red light turned black". Remember "Cut the power"......
With the C.D.A. crawling all over the place, Randall can't get the power back on to get the kid through the door. Believe me...it words out JUST like you said...
I have it ALL PLANNED out......trust me ^_^
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Post by Ranger Parsec on Mar 13, 2005 18:03:08 GMT -5
Brilliant chapter! I thoroughly enjoyed it and the interaction between characters is very nicely-done. They're all very In-Character. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Poor Randall, though.
Your writing style is very good as well. It seems to keep improving with every new story you write. But, as they say, practice makes perfect. ^_^
As for that one scene with Boo and Randall. It's simply wonderful. I loved it. It's really nice to see Randall's sensitive side every now and again, proving that he's not some lack-of-conscience, ruthless, mean "villian", like Waternoose should be labelled as. All in all, the chapter was awesome. I think the Randall/Boo scene was my favorite part.
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Post by RandallBoggs on Mar 13, 2005 18:11:11 GMT -5
Thank you ^_^ Most of the scenes will be Randall and Boo, but there will be other actions of other characters too ^_^
Yeah. If you can imagine the difficulty he would face. Having NO knowledge of how to be a parent. Especially one for a HUMAN child....
Heh. Some say PERFECT practice makes perfect. I just go where Keyboard and thoughts want me too ^_^
Thanks ^_^ I really liked that part. Randall did show his compassion about Boo wanting to go home, which Boo shared. They almost made a connection until the features Randall had that frightened Boo appeared because of Waternoose.... Don't worry. Waternoose'll get his. Suprisingly though....not by Randall....
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Post by MelTSS on Mar 14, 2005 0:57:28 GMT -5
ARGH!! You've got me hooked! Make more, yse? ;D It's so....interesting......o.O
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Post by RandallBoggs on Mar 14, 2005 15:19:34 GMT -5
Yeah. I'll get to it.... Got Bio's and Characters to do...
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