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Post by RandallBoggs on Aug 21, 2005 11:25:36 GMT -5
From the name, you might wonder.
This is a crossover idea I've been thinking of doing for a while now. It's actually ALLOT similar to another crossover idea I wanted to do, but am unsure.
Anybody interested in what this new story deals with?
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Post by RandallBoggs on Aug 22, 2005 19:38:14 GMT -5
Prologue: Once Held Dear
“Yet to return, the shadowed one.
Who quests for the Twilight Dragon
Rumbles the Dark Hearth,
And Helba, Queen of the Dark, has raised finally her army.
Apeiron, King of Light, beckons... At the base of the rainbow they meet.
Against the abominable "Wave," together they fight.
Alba's lake boils.
Light's great tree doth fall.
Power - all now to droplets turned in the temple of Arche Koeln.
Returns to nothing, this world of shadowless ones.
Never to return, the shadowless one.
Who quests for the Twilight Dragon.”
*
Those were the last words I heard before we logged out of “Fragment”. That inscrutable creation that was thought to be a “game”. Something that was thought of as a way to have fun, but turned into a complete nightmare.
Who am I?
My character name is Ryu, but my real name is Sean. I won’t explain everything, as it’s not important. Everything the past few days…or hours, I’ve lost track of time itself, have been full of confusion and chaos.
All I know is that I ended up here, with my back to the wall, outside a closed door in Monstropolis City Hospital. I still don’t know how long I’ve been here, but I certainly know why. I was just there, thinking to myself as I heard whimpers from the other side of the door.
Why did this happen? Why did we agree to this? Something like what had happened to him…there was no such thing.
All I know…is that something happened in there that they didn’t tell us. Something that had been in it. “Fragment” wasn’t just a game…something had caused all this. And the only way to find the answers was to log-in to the game. But the risk of another of us being diagnosed was what kept us back.
Everything that could be done by these doctors, nurses…has been done. But we still had an option. We had to log back into “Fragment” and find someway to cure what has happened. But I wonder…what have we gotten ourselves into?
*
I pushed off from the wall, starting down the hall again. But I stopped, looking back to take one last glance at the clipboard on the door of 712:
Patient: Caylin Swisher
Condition: Comatose
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Post by RandallBoggs on Aug 24, 2005 14:23:43 GMT -5
A few views but no one's interested yet again....
Veg help me out here.
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Post by RandallBoggs on Aug 24, 2005 15:18:49 GMT -5
Ok...anybody help me out here...
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Veg
Randall's Friend (800-1999)
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Post by Veg on Aug 24, 2005 16:30:30 GMT -5
Sorry I didn't respond soon, been pretty busy for the last week. Well it looks good, and I am wondering what the story deals with.  |
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Post by RandallBoggs on Aug 24, 2005 16:43:58 GMT -5
Thank god...
Well Veg...I can count on ya to review what is overlooked ^_^ Thanks.
Need a summery?
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Veg
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Post by Veg on Aug 24, 2005 17:04:12 GMT -5
Yes, please.  |
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Post by RandallBoggs on Aug 24, 2005 17:06:42 GMT -5
Well umm...ok...
But you may have to glance at my .net stories to get who some of the characters are.
Anyway...
SUMMARY:
When Caylin recieves a chance to be the first to try out a new VR game, he invites everyones else to join him. Little do they know what they were getting themselves into.
.....Heh well...there's the summary heh heh...
This is mainly a crossover that really lets the story itself speak for...well...itself ^_^
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Post by RandallBoggs on Aug 24, 2005 17:12:40 GMT -5
Oh! Almost forgot.
Pics for the story will be done as well.
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Veg
Randall's Friend (800-1999)
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Post by Veg on Aug 24, 2005 17:26:05 GMT -5
Oh wow! Sounds awesome! ;D
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Post by RandallBoggs on Aug 24, 2005 17:29:22 GMT -5
I'm hoping to do a title first.
I'm getting better at drawing Randall and getting on to drawing humans. I have one already done but it's pretty light.
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Post by Light Rises on Aug 25, 2005 15:59:09 GMT -5
Ah...VERY interesting so far, Sean! Your prose is very nicely-written, and I like the mysterious, dark tone you've set -- and you didn't even have to write a whole lot to get that nailed! A very promising start here...which, of course, means that I'm interested in seeing more. ~Light Rises |
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Post by RandallBoggs on Aug 25, 2005 16:30:41 GMT -5
Thanks LR ^_^
The crossover here is a M.I./DOT. Hack crossover.
Since Hack is anime in a word, there's going to be ALLOT of emotion here. Such as said, Caylin's in a coma...and you can imagine how that affects us all......
I'm gonna have to work on Randall's figure for the pic soon enough...
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