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Post by TheOnePistol on Oct 11, 2010 11:17:09 GMT -5
That was cool! Randall took martial arts. Cool! I don't think Reese is the only fan. He should see this website. I thought it was cute when Ned called him baby brother. I can't wait to read more! Yeah, Randall has always been Ned's little baby brother to him, i modified it, so it says that Ned is eight years older than Randall. Thanks for reading.
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Post by TheOnePistol on Oct 12, 2010 23:30:17 GMT -5
If your wondering why i haven't updated my fanfic yet, is because i did the one thing a writer shouldn't do, i got to excited and started the story without having a conflict in mind. Iv not updated it in a while because iv been trying to think of one. Well i finally have one, so now the story should be coming faster. ;D Iv been real busy with my classes and all, but i will try to start writing the next chapter tomorrow. For those of you who ARE reading this and like my story, sorry for keeping you waiting.
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Post by TheOnePistol on Oct 14, 2010 21:24:18 GMT -5
Chapter 5: Dinner
Jenny was rushing to stir, flip, and turn, everything she was cooking for dinner, while Boo was rushing to set the table for her.
Just then Frank walked into the kitchen, “Honey, I think were getting a little over out heads here, I mean do you realized that we just invited three MONSTERS over for diner?!”
“If their friends of Mary, so they are welcome here anytime.” Jenny said, “I don't know about that Randall guy though, I don't like him very much”
“He used to be a jerk mom, but he's real nice once you get to know him.” Boo said.
“(Sigh) I guess.” Jenny said, “Ok, everything's almost ready!”
…...............
Back in Monstropolis, Shwan, Ned, and Reese were at Harry Housin's, eating sushi. “-Once that is done, Monsters Inc will be finished” Shwan said with an evil grin.
“Good plan sir, but just along as Randall doesn't get involved in this” Ned said raising a hand, “I don't want my baby brother suffering because of me.”
“Don't worry Ned, just as long as he doesn't get in our way, he wont be a problem.” Shwan said, “Now that CEO, Mr. Sullivan, we are gonna have to deal with him. As long as he's around we wont be able to continue my plan.”
“We might have to deal with his eye ball friend too.” Ned added.
“I don't know sir” Reese said, “Are you sir we should be doing this, it seems very wrong”
“Reese, what did I tell you about talking back to your Masters” Ned said raising a brow.
Reese looked down, “To not do it, to listen and respect your Masters”
“Good” Ned said and looked back at Shwan. “So when dose we start?”
“Tonight” Shwan said, “You said you are visiting Randall tonight right?”
“Yes sir”
“Well before you go, we will have to hold Mike Wazowski somewhere, and then when your at Randall's I'll deal with Mr. Sullivan.” Shwan said.
“Thank you sir, with me being over at Randall's place with Randall, he wont have to get involved.”
“Exactly Ned, now, lets eat our sushi” Shwan said and they continued eating.
….........
Boo heard a knock on her closet door, and ran up and opened it. Standing there were the three monsters.
“Hey Boo!” all three said.
“Hey guys, come on in, dinner's almost ready.” Boo said walking out of the room, the three monsters followed.
“Hello boys!” Jenny said cheerfully.
“Hey!” Sully said and sniffed, “Oh my gosh, that smells really good!”
“Thank you! Its a roast” Jenny said.
“I wish I had a nose” Mike said looked at the ground.
Randall began flicking his tongue. “Mmm, yeah your missing out Mike” Randall said chuckling.
“Uh, hey guys” Frank said walking into the room.
“Hey” they said.
“Have a seat boys” Jenny said.
Frank, Jenny, and Boo sat down at their usual seats, leaving three for Boo's friends.
They then sat down. But when Sully sat in his, he was only in if for a few seconds before it collapsed under his weight.
“Sully, are you alright!” Mike said rushing over to help him up.
Randall fell out of his chair laughing.
“Randall that's not funny!” Boo said.
“Yes it was!” Randall said still rolling on the floor laughing, trying to catch his breath.
A few moments later, Frank bought in his lazy-boy chair and Sully used it.
“Sorry about the chair” Sully said embarrased.
Randall quietly chuckled, Jenny gave him a dirty look, “Its ok Sully”
They then ate, it was human food so the three monsters never ate or even heard of the food they were eating.
But it was delicious all the same, and they enjoyed it. “Mmm, that was delicious, Thank you!” Sully said.
“Yeah, thanks!” Randall and Mike said.
“Your very welcome” Frank said.
“Well hate to eat and run, but we really gotta get back” Sully said.
“Ok, it was fun having you over Sully” Boo said.
The three monsters said their goodbyes and went back though Boo's closet door. Sully turned it off, once they closed it.
“That, was also kind of awkward” Randall said.
Mike nodded.
“Well, my brother's coming over so I'll be heading home now.” Randall said
Randall said bye and left.
“Well Sul, I'm picking Celia up and were going to the movies, so I guess ill see you later too.”
“Alright then, see ya Mike”
Mike got into his car and drove off, a few minutes later arrived at Celia's, she was waiting at the sidewalk.
“Hey, Googely-Bear!” Celia said getting into the car.
“Hello, Smoopsi-Poo” Mike said.
Mike was about to dive off when the car just shut off on them.
“What the-” Mike said turning the key, but the car wouldn't start.
“Mike what a mat-” Suddenly two figures with masks, popped up form the back seat, and each put a cloth over Mike and Celia's face.
After a few seconds, Mike and Celia were out cold. The two figures took off the masks revealing the two were Reese and Ned.
They pulled the two into the back seat, and jumped up to the front, Ned pulled out a cellphone like device and flick a switch that was on it, suddenly the car started.
Ned pull out his real cellphone and dialed a number, “Shwan?, Its Ned” he said into the phone “We got em, we're on our way now” they then drove off.
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Post by sgtyayap on Oct 15, 2010 8:33:44 GMT -5
Wow! That's quite a twist. Like how you portrayed Reese as being reluctant to do what he did.
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Post by TheOnePistol on Oct 15, 2010 12:26:54 GMT -5
Chapter 6: The Plot
Ned and Reese pulled up I'm Mikes car, to a Motel on the other side of Monstropolis. They got out each carrying a big bag.
Ned knocked on the No. 6 door and Shwan let them in.
“Where do you want em” Ned said.
“Tie them up, and put them in the bathroom.” Shwan said
Reese and Ned turned the bags upside down and Mike and Celia fell out of them, still out cold. They then tied them up, so that Mike and Celia were back to back, and they sat them in the middle of the bathroom. Just then, Mike woke up.
“Uh, wha-, where am I?” Mike looked up and saw the three.
“You guys?” Mike said, and then noticed he was tied up with Celia. “Wha- whats going on!”
“Let us go now!” Mike shouted.
“Now, now, we just have you tied up here so you wont get in out way” Shwan said, “Once my plan is fulfilled, we will let you go”
“Plan, what plan?”
They left the bathroom and shut the door.
“Wait, WHAT PLAN!”
“Ok, I'm headed over to Randall's now” Ned said, “Reese, why don't you come with me”
“Alright sir” Reese said.
“I'll be at the factory dealing with Mr. Sullivan.” Shwan said. Ned nodded and both him and Reese left the room, getting into a different car, and left.
“Uh, what happened?” Celia was waking up.
“Celia?”
“Mikey, what happened, where are we?” Celia asked.
“(Sigh) well-”
…..............
Over at Randall's apartment he was cleaning up, he didn't want his big brother to come over to a messy apartment. Randall always looked up to Ned, and never wanted Ned to think down about him.
The door bell rang, and Randall, thew the cleaning supplies into the bathroom and shut the door, and ran up to the front door.
“Ned, Reese, how ya doin, come on in!” Randall said.
“Wow, nice place Randall!” Ned said looking around.
“Yeah!” Reese agreed.
The two went into the living room, and saw Randall's big flat screen TV. “Wow, I'll bet its nice watching sports on THAT!” Ned said.
“Yeah it is” Randall chuckled, “Can I get you two a soda?”
“Yeah, thanks!” They both said, Randall went into the kitchen.
Reese, and Ned, heard a noise and looked down.
“Hsssss”
“DAAAGGGHHH!!!” Both Ned and Reese screamed, jumping up onto the couch. “WHAT THE HECK IS THAT THING!” Reese yelled pointing at Gator.
Randall came back into the room, “That's my friend “Gator”
“Hsssss”
“He says “Hello” Randall said.
Ned looked at Randall, “Randall, I think you may have went a little loopy in the Human World!”
“Oh, he's not gonna bite, quit being a baby.” Randall said
Ned and Reese, slowly got down from the couch and walked over to Randall, who handed them their beverages.
"So Reese, dont mind me asking but, who are your parents" Randall asked, "Maby I know them"
"Well, um" Reese stuttered "C-can i use you bathroom?"
"Yeah sure, its over there" Randall pointed and Reese went into it and shut the door.
"Did i say something?"
"I forgot to tell you, Reese is an, orphan." Ned said, "It's best not to talk to him about it, he's a bit sensitive about that subject."
Just then Reese came back out, sniffed and wiped his left eye.
"Oh, Reese I'm so sorry, i didn't know." Randall said.
"Its ok" Reese said.
“So, you guys up for Poker?” Randall asked
Ned and Reese nodded.
…......................
Sully was walking down the hall about to file some paper work, when he ran into Shwan.
“Oh, Master Shwan!” Sully said
“Please, just call me Shwan” He said raising his hand smiling.
“Alright, how are you doing?”
“Need to have a word with you.” Shwan said.
“Alright then” Sully said and they both began walking down the hall.
“So you taught Randall, and his brother Marshal Arts?”
“Sure did, and they were very good students” Shwan said “Two of my best, as a matter of fact.”
“So I was wondering” Sully said, “What brings you to Monstropolis?”
They just approached the simulator room.
“Well I wanted to see my old student, and show him that his brother graduated my class” Shwan said.
“Oh?, Thats nice.”
“Yes it is” Shwan said opening the double doors and walking in, Sully followed.
“Oh and there was one other reason” Shwan said.
“And whats that?” Just then Sully notice a big metal door station, at the simulator, Sully gave a confused look.
“Wiping out this factory.” Shwan said
“Oh, wha-, wait, WHAT!?”
“Which is why I've gotta get rid of you” Shwan said
Just then, Shwan leaped forward and kicked Sully in the face, Sully fell backwards. He got back up and began swinging his fists at Shwan, who dodged every swing and countered it. After a few more punches and kicks, Sully fell to the ground.
Just then, Shwan went up to the door and activated it, then he opened the door, revealing the Himalayas. Sully got back up, but before he could even completely stand up straight, Shwan drop kicked him in the face. Sully fell backwards right though the door, and landed in snow.
“NO!” Sully shouted as Shwan slammed the door shut and deactivated it. He then took out his cellphone.
…..........
Back at Randall's apartment, they were all playing poker, and Ned was wining when his phone rang.
“Hello?” Ned said.
“Mr. Sullivan's taken care of, time for the next part.”
“Yes sir” Ned said hanging up.
"So Reese, how old are you?" Randall asked.
"Sixteen, my bir-" Reese was interrupted my Ned.
“Hey, hate to leave so soon, but we really have to go, sorry Randall” Ned said.
“Oh, no problem” Randall said, “See you again tomorrow?”
“Sure thing!” Ned said, “Come on Reese”
“Yes sir” Reese said, and they both left.
Randall signed and looked at Gator.
“Hsssss”
“What do you mean, you didn't like them?” Randall asked.
“Hsssss”
“Yeah, well, they didn't like you either” Randall said looking at a stack of papers on the counter.
Randall just then remembered he had to bring those to Sully, so he picked the stack up.
“Later Gator” Randall said leaving.
“Hsssss”
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Post by sgtyayap on Oct 15, 2010 14:58:16 GMT -5
Cool! Your portrayal of Reese was excellent! ;D Would've been nice if Gator knew what Reese was going through, though.
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Post by TheOnePistol on Oct 15, 2010 15:05:02 GMT -5
Cool! Your portrayal of Reese was excellent! ;D Would've been nice if Gator knew what Reese was going through, though. Thank You! and yeah Gator didn't know.
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Leopardstream
Randall's Skivvy (0-299)
No one wants cake? OKAY! *shoves cake in mouth*
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Post by Leopardstream on Oct 15, 2010 21:23:12 GMT -5
NED*gasp* Ned is a person design o f Randall! I even pput him in my comics, ecept he's blue, not green XD In my comics, hes randall's cousin.
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Post by TheOnePistol on Oct 15, 2010 21:25:32 GMT -5
NED*gasp* Ned is a person design o f Randall! I even pput him in my comics, ecept he's blue, not green XD In my comics, hes randall's cousin. Ok, I swear i had no idea, I made my fanfic Ned up completely with out getting the idea form anyone, this is a funny coincidence though. lol You do comics? I would like to see them! ;D
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Randall's Skivvy (0-299)
Do you hear that? It's the winds of change *evil grin*
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Post by windsofchange13 on Oct 16, 2010 9:27:28 GMT -5
Ooh the suspense! The wait was worth it! Can't wait to read more!
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Post by TheOnePistol on Oct 16, 2010 9:28:42 GMT -5
Ooh the suspense! The wait was worth it! Can't wait to read more! Awesome, Thanks! ;D
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windsofchange13
Randall's Skivvy (0-299)
Do you hear that? It's the winds of change *evil grin*
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Post by windsofchange13 on Oct 16, 2010 15:09:30 GMT -5
I just now thought of something. Do you realize how horrified Jenny would be if she found out there's a whole website, i.e. this one, dedicated to the monster (literally monster) that took her daughter? XD
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Post by TheOnePistol on Oct 17, 2010 22:01:23 GMT -5
Chapter 7: An Evil Conspiracy
Randall got into his car and drove to the factory. About twenty minutes later he got there, there was no one there, because there is more than enough energy the company can afford everyone to take the weekend off.
Randall walked down the empty halls until he came to Sully's office, but he was not there.
“Hmm, I'll try calling him” Randall said to himself wiping out his cell phone and dialing Sully's number, It rang and rang, but no answer. (That's odd)
…....
Over at the Motel were Mike and Celia were being held, Ned and Reese were talking about the next step of the plan.
“I gotta go meet Master Shwan at the factory” Ned said, “You to keep an eye on those two, can you do that?”
“Yes sir, I can do that” Reese said saluting him.
“...Don't do that”
“Ok” Reese said.
Just then Ned left, Reese just plopped onto the bed and started flipping though the channels.
“Let us out of here!”
“Quiet you two!” Reese said still flipping though the channels, “Oh, Monstropolis's Most Wanted, awesome!”
….............
Randall heard a voice coming from the simulator room, so he stuck over to the double doors and peaked inside.
“Shwan?” He whispered to himself.
Shwan was standing in the middle of the simulator room talking on his phone, Randall then noticed the big metal door in the door station, (That door looks very familiar.), He then noticed a small patch of blue fur lying on the ground next to the door. (What the)
“Alright, are you on you way?” Shwan said into the phone.
“Good”
“The second part of the plan should be simple, we simply need to overload the factories energy core” Shwan said, “The explosion should take out the entire building.”
“and yes Mr. Sullivan is taken care of”
“....Well I guess you can say I sent him on a field trip (chuckle)”
Randall's eyes widened after hearing that, and seeing the patch of fur on the ground, he knew exactly what happened to Sully, not only that, he now knows all about Shwans plan.
Randall backed up out the door and began running down the hall, when he turned a corner he bumped into Ned, who was holding his cellphone to his ear.
“Randall!” Ned said hanging up, “What are you doing here?”
“Ned listen!” Randall said, “We gotta call the CDA, Shwan is-”
“Ned, STOP HIM!” Shwan shouted coming around the corner.
Ned just stood there, and Randall looked at him.
“Ned, you-, your in on this?” Randall said
“Randall listen, I-”
“I cant believe you!” Randall shouted, “I cant believe both of you!”
“(Sigh) You weren't supposed to know about this Randall” Ned said.
“Yeah, well now I do, and I'm calling the CDA!”
“I cant let you do that”
“Oh what are you gonna do Ned, stop me?”
“I don't wanna fight you Randall”
“Yeah well, I do!” Randall said lunging at Ned with his fist.
Ned ducked and avoided Randall's swing, and then jabbed Randall in his side. Randall swung again and hit Ned in the side of the neck. Right as Randall swung again, Ned caught his arm, and pinned Randall to the wall, Randall struggled for a moment and then head butted him. Ned stumbled backwards and Randall tackled him though a glass door. Once they were both on the ground, Randall punched Ned in the face twice, before Shwan struck him in the back of the head, knocking Randall unconscious.
Ned pushed Randall's limp body off of him, and stood up.
“Ned, I want you to go guard the entrance.” Shwan said, “I'll deal with Randall.
“Don't hurt him!” Ned said
“I wont, I promise, now go”
Ned looked down at Randall for a moment and then a Shwan, “Yes sir” Then Ned ran down the hall toward the entrance.
Shwan looked down at Randall, sighed and grabbed his tail and dragged him back to the simulator room. Randall was half awake.
“You know Randall” Shwan said, “If you must know why I am doing this, then I'll tell you”
“My family owns a Scaring Company, sort of like this one. And because of this, so they say, extreme success of a company, and its “laugh energy”, its running my families company out of business.”
Randall could hear and understand every word he was saying, but he was to out of it to move.
“(Sigh) Its a shame you had to get in the way Randall.” Shwan said activating the door, and opened it.
Shwan then grabbed Randall's tail and dragged him though the door. “Good bye Randall, you were my best student.” Shwan said, and walked back though the door and shut it.
Randall was regaining complete consciousness, he looked up at the door, got up and walked to it. When he opened it, he realized that he was banished, once again.
“No!” he shouted, punching the door frame. He then turned around and noticed that there was a huge blizzard going on were he was, he shivered. (I've gotta find shelter quick, or I'm gonna freeze to death) Randall thought, and began walking away from the door.
He only walked about twenty yards, when he noticed something off in the distance, something in the snow. As he got closer and closer, what it was became clear.
“(Gasp) Sully!” Randall shouted running up to Sully, who was unconscious half buried in snow. Randall began digging him out.
“Come on you big fur ball, WAKE UP!” Randall said smacking his hand back and forth on Sully's face.
“Ugh, wha-, Randall?” Sully said still half unconscious.
“Come on big guy, we gotta get out of this blizzard.” Randall said pulling Sully's arm over his shoulder and helping him regain his footing.
Randall then half carried Sully, but they only got a few yards before Sully fell unconscious again and his body went limp. Sully was to heavy for Randall to fully carry, so when Sully fell over, so did Randall.
“Sully, wake up!” Randall said smacking his face again.
Suddenly he hard loud foot steps approaching him. Randall looked up and gasped when he saw a huge dark figure standing over him.
“WELCOME TO THE HIMALAYAS!”
Randall gave a confused look.
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Post by sgtyayap on Oct 17, 2010 23:37:56 GMT -5
In all honesty, Reese seems less remorseful than I expected, what with the scene in which he guards Mike and Celia. Other than that, great progress!
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Post by TheOnePistol on Oct 18, 2010 9:15:41 GMT -5
In all honesty, Reese seems less remorseful than I expected, what with the scene in which he guards Mike and Celia. Other than that, great progress! Don't worry, I've got good things in store for Reese.
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