FINE!!IS THIS BETTER FOR YOU?!?!
Icefang pulled the last of himself as the climbed the mountain.
almost there
, he told himself.
Icefang turned as he heard painting. A sleek black Bombay dug her claws into the hard rock.
"Hurry up, Leapardstream! We don't have all day!" he yowled.
"I know! Not my figgin' fault Spottedstalker decided to join PawClan in the Forest of Balence!" she meowed, pulling herself up.
"Well, who taunted him?" Icefang asked, pulling himself up another boulder. Sharp pointed rocks where scatterd here and there, and didn't offer a foothold of space to climb on.
"Huh? Who dared him?"
"His mom!"
"Who was?..."
"Foreststone, ya mouse-brain!" Leapardstream climbed higher and father than Icefang, kicking little stones into his face.
"Stop it, ya ass!"
"Make me!"
Icefang tried to get ahold of her tail, but instead he heard: "Stop saying ass and beach, Icefang!"
It was Flameclaw, along with the murmers of agreement from Littlerock,Foreststone,Powermud, and Sunfur.
"Fine!" Icefang heaved upwards, and came to a small legde. A cave was near by, and night was falling. The blackish, dark blue swalled the sky, and the half full moon ment that SecretClan's medicene cats, Ravenwing and Moonlake, would go to Scarred Ground, where reall marked with blood stripes and mossy rocks and a wide rive ran all through out Scarred Ground. In the center, the moon shined in the middle, where all the medicene cats whent to sleep there an share tounges with StarClan.
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BETTER?!?!?!
IT'S NOT ORIGINAL WORK WITH MY STUFF ON IT!