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Doubt
Apr 23, 2010 18:15:13 GMT -5
Post by mentalguru on Apr 23, 2010 18:15:13 GMT -5
Thoughts about plotholes made me realise 'Connections' has one. So this started.
This is sort of a very short prequel to something I may update later.
Will primarily follow Sulley. But Randall is a main focus. --
It was strange to think of it looking back . For years later he would remember that the door had not made a sound he'd expected, one of wood hitting concrete, of splinters scattering across its surface. In fact the sound had been low and dull as it had reached them, echoing throughout the whole area, or at least it would have done if the creaks and clacks of the moving doors around them did not mute the sound a little.
And that was the end of it. The so called perfect end to the so called perfect story. Belief is more powerful then we can care to imagine, and they believed what they had done was the right thing. The just thing. That what they wanted was also what was what was needed.
That desire was the same as duty. Or perhaps they did not care either way.
But in every action committed by anyone, whether that action is committed by just one person or many, if they live long enough to do so, there will always be someone who will eventually come to doubt.
Always.
Sulley doubted.
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Doubt
Apr 23, 2010 18:26:15 GMT -5
Post by sgtyayap on Apr 23, 2010 18:26:15 GMT -5
Man! I hoped it would be longer! Nonetheless, it's still VERY powerful!
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Doubt
Apr 27, 2010 7:23:08 GMT -5
Post by mentalguru on Apr 27, 2010 7:23:08 GMT -5
Thanks! I hope to continue it, but it sort of can stand on its own.
A part of me wants to do some inetr-connected oneshots. I had an idea involving Sulley before he met Boo again, but it kind of dried up on me and I didn't like it on finishing it. Though there were some things I liked. I need time to get into connections again, I WILL get back to that one. But I'm feeling less than inspired with it right now. I still have my ideas but other ones are badgering me. For instance, I have an original fiction idea (finally) which might not actually be that half bad.
Plus I am getting round to getting Microsoft word on my laptop again, but the product key is apparently wrong. Damn. I use LIVE JOURNAL for spell check, but it isn't reliable, and uses American english so obviously I can't be 100% sure if it's telling me the right thing sometimes in the context of my own spelling).
I do have an idea for Sulley shortly after meeting Boo again though. Meeting up with a Waternoose in prison.
But a part of me wants to do it before that, perhaps shortly after Waternoose was taken by the CDA (like a month or two maybe?) and BEFORE Boo comes back.
Probably the former though. A part of me wonders whether I should just have Waternoose messing with his head as well as having the 'father like son' thing and Waternoose twisting the doubt in or JUST the latter.
I think it would almost be amusing in a dark way if Waternoose prehaps started a spark of doubt (not perhaps in his abilities, since Sulley would probably already have them, but in his sense of morality), or maybe if Boo did at once stage and then Waternoose added more kindling.
Because the direct opposite to Waternoose would be Boo really. (The child and one of the pawns in the original plan and the old master behind it).
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