Post by superluxray on Nov 27, 2009 21:13:56 GMT -5
This is a fanfic I'm writing pretty much when I have free time. If you don't like Fan Characters, or call every fan character who is female a Mary Sue, please clicky the little green circle with the arrow in it and go back. K , Thx.
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1.
I stared out the passenger seat window of my roommate, Lily's, car. I tapped my claw against my leg. I'd always dreaded being transferred to another scaring facility, and now my fears had come true. The new city looked nice enough, but Lily and I did have to rent out a new flat. I looked over at Lily casually. Her six eyes fixed on the road ahead, and she held the steering wheel confidently, with both hands. Slinky black hair fell over her face and down her back. She looked very tired, because she had to drive us to the airport at one in the morning. Finally it dawned on me that we might get to the building soon, so I pulled down the sun visor and looked at my reflection in the mirror. Green scales covered my body, interrupted at certain intervals by pinkish red stripes. I had about 50 spikes on my head, all sharp tines meant to protect my head, like a helmet. My eyes were the same red color as my stripes. I was undoubtedly a "classic" Night Stalker type monster, lean and ampish and meant for hunting in the jungle. The Night Stalker breed had been hybridized recently, so other monsters tend to stare at me like I'm a human or something. I sighed and closed the visor. Shortly after that, we arrived at the new facility. The building was huge and modern, not a lot like my old station. I stared up at the building thinking, yeah, I could probably scale that and get to the roof.
"Venus!"
Hearing my name, I swiveled around to the source of the noise. Lily stood with her arms crossed. "You're spacing out, chickadee. Focus." she said as we walked closer to the building. Lily pulled her helmet on her head.
"You ready to scare?" Lily asked snarkily.
"Heck yeah. You ready to to annoy me while I'm TRYING to scare?" I snapped right back. I looked down at her. I had at least 24 centimeters on her.
I saw the door of the facility. My heart pounded. The place was full of monsters, tall, short, furry, bald, and every color you could imagine, and a few that haven't been invented yet. I stood bolt upright, then paused, and hunched over once more. I grabbed the metal handle of the door, and surprisingly is didn't burn my had off. I figured this situation was like pulling off a bandaid, do it fast and it'll be painless. So I boldly stepped in the door, with Lily at my side.
"Well, time to do what I'm good at."
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Hey that's the first chapter. Tell me what you thought of it!
(Yes, Randall WILL be in the next chapter. Don't get your knickers in a twist.)
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1.
I stared out the passenger seat window of my roommate, Lily's, car. I tapped my claw against my leg. I'd always dreaded being transferred to another scaring facility, and now my fears had come true. The new city looked nice enough, but Lily and I did have to rent out a new flat. I looked over at Lily casually. Her six eyes fixed on the road ahead, and she held the steering wheel confidently, with both hands. Slinky black hair fell over her face and down her back. She looked very tired, because she had to drive us to the airport at one in the morning. Finally it dawned on me that we might get to the building soon, so I pulled down the sun visor and looked at my reflection in the mirror. Green scales covered my body, interrupted at certain intervals by pinkish red stripes. I had about 50 spikes on my head, all sharp tines meant to protect my head, like a helmet. My eyes were the same red color as my stripes. I was undoubtedly a "classic" Night Stalker type monster, lean and ampish and meant for hunting in the jungle. The Night Stalker breed had been hybridized recently, so other monsters tend to stare at me like I'm a human or something. I sighed and closed the visor. Shortly after that, we arrived at the new facility. The building was huge and modern, not a lot like my old station. I stared up at the building thinking, yeah, I could probably scale that and get to the roof.
"Venus!"
Hearing my name, I swiveled around to the source of the noise. Lily stood with her arms crossed. "You're spacing out, chickadee. Focus." she said as we walked closer to the building. Lily pulled her helmet on her head.
"You ready to scare?" Lily asked snarkily.
"Heck yeah. You ready to to annoy me while I'm TRYING to scare?" I snapped right back. I looked down at her. I had at least 24 centimeters on her.
I saw the door of the facility. My heart pounded. The place was full of monsters, tall, short, furry, bald, and every color you could imagine, and a few that haven't been invented yet. I stood bolt upright, then paused, and hunched over once more. I grabbed the metal handle of the door, and surprisingly is didn't burn my had off. I figured this situation was like pulling off a bandaid, do it fast and it'll be painless. So I boldly stepped in the door, with Lily at my side.
"Well, time to do what I'm good at."
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Hey that's the first chapter. Tell me what you thought of it!
(Yes, Randall WILL be in the next chapter. Don't get your knickers in a twist.)
