Nidhiki
Randall's Skivvy (0-299)
Evil comes in all shapes and sizes
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Exile
Jan 30, 2009 14:57:30 GMT -5
Post by Nidhiki on Jan 30, 2009 14:57:30 GMT -5
ok...i'm stuck with writers block for my other story, and i was hoping to come up with some ideas to get it moving. But..instead, i thought up of a completely new story, and it about..well...i'm not telling ;D ;D
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DinoGirl
Randall's Head Servant (300-799)
Aladar sure has one sparkling eye!
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Exile
Jan 30, 2009 16:44:27 GMT -5
Post by DinoGirl on Jan 30, 2009 16:44:27 GMT -5
Hmm... my anticipation is in 'start' mode. No matter the plot, I think I'll still read as I enjoy your Monster Rampage story.
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Nidhiki
Randall's Skivvy (0-299)
Evil comes in all shapes and sizes
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Exile
Feb 2, 2009 18:37:34 GMT -5
Post by Nidhiki on Feb 2, 2009 18:37:34 GMT -5
Cool
Chapter 1- Exile
Randall slowly opened his eyes. The last thing he remembered was being thrown into the Human world, being hit with a shovel, and the rest was a blur. He looked at his surroundings. It was quite dark, and there was snow on the ground. It looked like he was in a jungle, but as he moved he noticed he was in a large cage, and to his surprise, he was in a zoo. Randall rubbed his head, and looked through the bars. He was on the edge of a huge courtyard, and had a cage of annoying monkeys next to him. On the far end of the courtyard, there were two men, dressed in black. Randall noticed that they were speaking Russian "Knew I should have taken Russian at school," Randall muttered to himself. Randall heard a noise coming from the cage next to him. He got closer, and a lizard came out. It was the same species as Randall, but only had one pair of arms and was a Dark red. "Hey, you...” Randall whispered "Oh look, guess you've been banished aswell...so... whats your name" The lizard asked "Randall Boggs" "Cool, im Jim Haze" "Ok" Randall said, "Can you speak Russian" "Yh...why" Jim asked "What are they saying" Randall asked "Well... alot of stuff actually, something about a Device, a Stargate, Something about a thing called the Goa'uld and a guy called Anubis, other then that the rest is just chit chat" "Stargate, Goa'uld, Anubis? Who or what are they," Randall said "Don’t know" Jim replied Randall stared back at the Russians, and they turned and looked back at him. Randall stepped back, but one of the Russians pulled out something from behind his back, and the last thing Randall remembered was a blue light coming at him.
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DinoGirl
Randall's Head Servant (300-799)
Aladar sure has one sparkling eye!
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Exile
Feb 3, 2009 6:14:14 GMT -5
Post by DinoGirl on Feb 3, 2009 6:14:14 GMT -5
Hmm... very nice start I hope we get to learn more about this Jim Haze character as he sounds interesting .
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Nidhiki
Randall's Skivvy (0-299)
Evil comes in all shapes and sizes
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Exile
Feb 12, 2009 19:21:38 GMT -5
Post by Nidhiki on Feb 12, 2009 19:21:38 GMT -5
Chapter 2- through the Gate Randall slowly opened his eyes, and once again rubbed his head. He was now in a smaller cage, in the back of a van. Jim was next to him in another cage. "What happened? Randall asked "You here shot with a Zat" "A what..." "Zat, alien gun, one shot stuns, second kills," Jim said "Great" The van travelled down a windy road, into the snow of Siberia. Hours later, the van pulled up to a large warehouse. The back of the van opened, and the Russian men picked up the cages and taking them inside. The inside was very dark; Randall could hardly see a thing. But as they turned a corner, the saw a huge ring. It was pure metal, with a load of symbols written on the edge. The Russians placed the cages at the foot of the ramp. Suddenly, the edges of the stargate glowed, and the ring activated. A huge wave looking thing shot out of it. "What is that?" Randall said "That" the Russian answered" is the Stargate" The men picked up the cages, and took them to the gate. It was like a wall of water, which Randall was reluctant to go through. The men pushed them into it. The next few moments were a blur, and before he knew it, he was on the other end. Randall looked around. He was no longer on earth. Randall and Jim looked upwards, to see a large ship come down and hover over them. "What the... this aint real" Randall said "Why" Jim asked "There is no such thing as aliens" However, Randall was about to be proved wrong. Huge rings came down from the ship, and in the middle was a bright light. As the rings went back into the ship, in it's place where three figures. They looked human, but there head was covered in a huge helmet in the shape of Horus, the third the shape of a jackal. "Ok...who are they" "There Jaffa" Jim answered. The Horus guards carried two staffs. They walked over to the cage, opened it, and pulled Jim out "HEY... Let go of me!” The Jaffa hit Jim with the end of the staff, but Jim still struggled to be free. The Jaffa repeatedly hit him with the staff, until the jackal guard intervened. "Stop..our master wants him in one piece" The guard stopped, and took Jim under the ship. The rings once again rose down, and beamed Jim and the guard onto the ship. The jackal guard looked at Randall. "You are next" Wave looking thing Traveling through the gate Horus gaurd with staff weapon Jackle gaurd the ship
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DinoGirl
Randall's Head Servant (300-799)
Aladar sure has one sparkling eye!
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Exile
Feb 14, 2009 5:46:50 GMT -5
Post by DinoGirl on Feb 14, 2009 5:46:50 GMT -5
Hmm... nice second chapter. I'm only just starting to see the resemblence to the Egyptians with the Jackal guard being like Anubis and Horus... well being Horus ;D. Anyway, so far so good, I'm anticipating more .
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Nidhiki
Randall's Skivvy (0-299)
Evil comes in all shapes and sizes
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Exile
Feb 21, 2009 21:44:16 GMT -5
Post by Nidhiki on Feb 21, 2009 21:44:16 GMT -5
Chapter 3- New world Randall looked at the Jackal guard (who will be called JG, for short). It walked over to the cage, and as it was about to open it, a shell came out of now where, just missing the Russians. The JG looked around, and not seeing anyone, walked back under the ship, the two Horus guards did the same. "But, wait, you can’t leave us here, we’ll die" One of the Russians said The JG looked at him "Your lives are of no concern to Anubis" "We had a deal" "Plans change," The JG said The rings covered the guards, and teleported them onto the ship, which then sped of. The Russians ran for the Stargate, leaving Randall on his own. Jim, however, was not in good situation ether. The small craft sped towards a huge mother ship in orbit around the green planet. The guards took Jim away, while The JG went of down the opposite corridor. It eventually made it to a large, virtually empty room. There was just a gold throne on one end, and at the other end was a large window, with a cloaked figure looking out. The JG bowed before the figure "My lord, we have got the monster you wanted" "But there is another one" The figure said "Yes my lord but.." "..But nothing, I want the other monster destroyed, not excuses" "Yes my lord" Randall was running through the miles of grassland there was. He didn't know where he was, where the stargate was, or where he was going. However, he was once again running after one of the Alien fighters swooped down on him. It fired two energy blasts from its wings, and the blast just missed Randall. It flew over, and fired again. Randall then noticed a larger craft swooping in. It was armed with two under mounted staff cannons. Which fired rapidly at Randall, causing a massive explosion, with Randall in the centre ON board the Mothership, Jim was tied down to a large table looking thing. It was covered with strange hieroglyphs. Jim looked around, but the door to the room opened, and two Horus guards walked in, followed by the cloaked figure. "Your are the one called Jim, I am Anubis" He spoke, walking around Jim "As I have told your captain, I will tell you nothing" "There will be no need for torture, this device, will be implanted into your brain" Anubis held up a small, blue sphere, with spikes coming of it. "It will then make a link with your mind, and the ships computer, your mind will be, downloaded," He continued, "You will no doubt resist, and you will no doubt fail" "What of Randall" Jim asked Anubis turned to look at him, but Jim could only see a shield over Anubis's face. "Your purple friend... He is dead" ------------------------------------------- Anubis Mothership Alien fighters (Death gliders) Bigger ship (Al'Kesh
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DinoGirl
Randall's Head Servant (300-799)
Aladar sure has one sparkling eye!
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Exile
Feb 22, 2009 3:42:47 GMT -5
Post by DinoGirl on Feb 22, 2009 3:42:47 GMT -5
Cliffhanger! I'm fully anticipating more and I'm beginning to like this Jim character. Randall's dead, I don't...
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Nidhiki
Randall's Skivvy (0-299)
Evil comes in all shapes and sizes
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Exile
Mar 22, 2009 13:07:05 GMT -5
Post by Nidhiki on Mar 22, 2009 13:07:05 GMT -5
Sorry for the long brake.... Chapter four- the Mothership For four days, Anubis's Mothership was in orbit above the planet, and for four days Jim was trying to escape, he was no on escape 2005, the Horus guards where efficient. Jim was now, however, lost. He had just alerted the whole ship. He was currently invisible, on the ceiling. The JG was followed by three Horus guards "Where are they?" the JG ordered "I'm sorry, I’m afraid we lost them" "Then you have disappointed our lord. FIND HIM" Jim ran away, around a few corners, and then came up to a large room, with a balcony overlooking a huge courtyard. He stepped onto it, and saw thousands of black solders marching in, with a hologram of Anubis watching them "You are my creations, my loyal army,” Anubis said, "Soon, I will unleash you onto the galaxy, and once and for all, we will destroy Earth" "HAIL ANUBIS, HAIL ANUBIS, HAIL ANUBIS" The solders shouted "YOU" Jim spun around, and found the room was full of Horus guards, pointing there staff weapons at him. "OH" Jim said He ran at the guards grabbing one of the staffs, and began swinging it round. In moments, all the guards were on the floor. "I'm getting the hang of this" "Yes..You are" Anubis walked in, accompanied by to of the Super Solders (Kull Warriors) "Oh..Hello" Jim said The Kull Warriors grabbed Jim, and took him to the nearby window, over looking the planet. "I know you think your friend is alive, but I will prove that he isn't" "How" "I will destroy the planet" Anubis sat on the throne, and pushed some of the buttons. The ship began to shudder. Then the Dome at the top opened and elevated, the ships top pointed at the ground, and fired. A red beam hit the ground, destroyed the Stargate, and destroyed the planet. "Now he's completely destroyed" Jim turned to Anubis "And now..I will go to earth, and destroy the Monster world," Anubis said "How.." Jim asked "I will destroy earth, and the resulting explosion will travel through them door things, and destroy the monster world" --------------------------- The mothership firing Kull Warrior
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Nidhiki
Randall's Skivvy (0-299)
Evil comes in all shapes and sizes
Posts: 249
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Exile
Apr 6, 2009 10:49:39 GMT -5
Post by Nidhiki on Apr 6, 2009 10:49:39 GMT -5
Chapter 5- the invasion
Randall opened his eyes. He was now in a large bright room. To one side there was a large round window. All around there were computers on the wall. A bright beam came from the roof. When it disappeared, a small, grey alien was standing there. It had large black eyes, and was just as tall as a child "Greetings" it said, "I am Commander Thor, supreme commander of the Asgaurd Fleet" "Cool, so where am I?" Randall asked "You are onboard one of our ships, in orbit around a planet called Pluto" "You do know it’s not classed as a planet anymore.." "Yes, yes I know. You have been unconscious for the past five days" "oh..so..How did I survive that blast?" "We were able to teleport you just at the last minuet, to Anubis, you are dead" "Ok... why does this Anubis want me?" "You don’t know...oh..Well...You have the Mind of the Ancients" "Who are they?" Randall asked "Your asking allot of questions," Thor said "In know" "Oh..Well..The Ancients are the most intelligent creatures in the Universe. They were the ones who built the Stargate, this explains how you built the Scream Extractor" "Oh"
Earth...The White House
"Mr President, we have a situation" the secretary of defence said, "Two alien ships have just appeared at the moon" "Do you thing we should launch Prometheus," the President said "If this is all that they have, then no. We don’t want to to launch our only defence against two ships" The lights began to flicker, and then a cloaked figure appeared in the room. The president stood up, and Anubis stepped forward "You are the leader of this world," Anubis said "I am one of many" "Then you represent the world, Bow before your god" Anubis said "Not going to happen" The president said, staring right at Anubis "Then you bring destruction upon yourself" "Don’t let us fool you, we're gonna fight" "If you truly have weapons that match mine, you would have used them by now," Anubis said "We’re just keeping them safe" "We will soon see" Anubis disappeared, and the lights came back on. The president sat back down and rubbed his head "We’re doomed"
Earth Orbit
Anubis's Mothership appeared out of nowhere, it was accompanied by thousands of smaller ships. These ships had a gold triangle based pyramid in the middle. Jim was looking out of his sell window; he could see the ships surrounding Earth. He turned to the JG "You can’t do this, your going to kill thousands of people" "They are non-believers and will be burned" A Horus guard walked in "Anubis has ordered the Prisoner to be killed" Jim gulped The JG opened the cell door and pointed his staff at Jim -----------------------------------
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