V
Randall's Head Servant (300-799)
Personal Lover of Randall
Posts: 361
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Post by V on Apr 22, 2010 18:37:49 GMT -5
Just to tell you now, I just listened to your cues and they're amazing... honest! ;D
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Post by sgtyayap on Apr 22, 2010 19:17:12 GMT -5
Again, thank you! ;D
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V
Randall's Head Servant (300-799)
Personal Lover of Randall
Posts: 361
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Post by V on Apr 22, 2010 19:54:34 GMT -5
Anytime! ;D
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Post by ivyandbro on Sept 24, 2010 21:47:22 GMT -5
I read the story just now It was pretty good, maybe it was the Mike dying part that added to your high score, haha. I would give this a 9/10, because twice you accidentally repaced the letter 'o' with a 6 and the transition's sort of too fast for me. Overall, it was pretty good and the ending was very good.
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Post by sgtyayap on Sept 24, 2010 22:23:32 GMT -5
Yeah, I've never been that good at transitions, unfortunately. Glad to see you liked it!
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Leopardstream
Randall's Skivvy (0-299)
No one wants cake? OKAY! *shoves cake in mouth*
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Post by Leopardstream on Sept 24, 2010 23:51:13 GMT -5
The 1st chapter where Randall tells Boo about kitty not coming for her made me think of me telling my babay siste rto shut up when she sqeals.... A connection. my English teacher is growing on me
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